Reviews for Little Green and Easybella
bornonhalloween chapter 35 . 4/10/2016
I'm so glad LG made Bella his priority and didn't get into a fight with Jake...at least not YET!
I thought he'd go ape shit over the blood, but I think we're okay momentarily. Very cool to be inside his head at rehearsal - Mateo's strategy was awesome - and I LOVED the scene with Jazz. He clearly still has to struggle with basic interactions, and even when Jazz thinks he's being soft and easy, it's still a major challenge for LG.
SO GOOD!
xxx
bornonhalloween chapter 34 . 4/10/2016
"I don't mind a touch of Asperger's..." LOL! You are so irreverent!

OMG CLIFFIE OF ALL CLIFFIES! A naked cliffie! I guess we find out now if Edward really does get jelly!
OH MAN. *flips to next page*
bornonhalloween chapter 33 . 4/10/2016
Awww your post about Katalina! 3
bornonhalloween chapter 32 . 4/10/2016
Who the EFF is Rupert?
HAHA! OMG the glass shards! Hmm, that Edward got to be some kind of dominant all of a sudden, didn't he now? Heehee! SHMEXY SHMEXY scene there!
xo
bornonhalloween chapter 31 . 4/10/2016
OMG that description of "firsts" from BPOV. I WANT THAT.

Also, I was worried Esme would walk in and see Edward and Bella all close like that...and is that why she sent him away and kept them apart and this is gonna break me! So hurry up and get it over with goddammitttt!
xo
bornonhalloween chapter 30 . 4/10/2016
I loved this chapter on jealousy and forgiveness and especially Edward's logic about why he forgave Esme "for the thousands of things she'd done right, instead of breaking up with her for the one thing she'd done wrong." And your concept of faithfulness was fascinating, thought-provoking stuff, young lady! Fascinating how your mind works ...or his? And Tanya, ...hmm, will she rethink her breakup? I don't think most of us humans could manage on Edward's supercharged level! But what if we could? O.o
XOXOXO
bornonhalloween chapter 29 . 4/10/2016
WOW, that powerful forgiveness coming from LG. His perspective was SO unique and powerful. Frustrated with Esme for not just letting his forgiveness be enough, sad that he didn't feel better afterwards, taking on her guilt and sorrow. So sad that HE had to lose his Esme because of her terrible decisions. His maturity in being able to cut right through to what really mattered.

And that flashback in the tub! GAH! The little boy being saved finally but so scared he was about to meet the worst danger his mother had poisoned his mind with! So interesting how you juxtapose the two mothers' failings, so dramatically different and yet...maybe similar in many ways. How you manage this in such few words is truly...well... breathtaking is not too strong a word. XOXO
bornonhalloween chapter 27 . 4/5/2016
"I know she will make me whole again. She always, always does." Ohhhhhhh. I'm wondering how many times these two can have sex and make me keep feeling like it's their first time every damn time! GAH!
Oh man. He has so so much going on inside that little head of his all the time, and Bella...would she even want to know? That he doubted her, even got angry at her for what might have been in those letters? Maybe he should read them, but then again, maybe he shouldn't. But HOW MATURE he's requested a meeting to talk with his mother!
GO, Little Green!
xoxo
bornonhalloween chapter 26 . 4/3/2016
The coffee maker sounded like Darth Vader having an anxiety attack. I had to stop reading and come down here to record that one. Also, I had to stop laughing because I couldn't read with my eyes closed from laughing so hard. OMG that was QUITE the conversation during the hand job! He is such a trip. How DOES she keep up? I loved that little moment where she's disappointed him for one brief second about not wanting breakfast but then he digests it, moves right on, and is perfectly happy. Ah, thank goodness for uncomplicated men. I have one of those too. :)
xoxo
bornonhalloween chapter 25 . 4/3/2016
HAHAHA NO SPILLAGE! That's kind of perfect!
Wow, that was a truly horrifying story from poor LG's past. Do we want him to remember that? :( Poor kid. But beautifully, poignantly drawn, especially how the past bleeds into the present, even without his knowledge. Gorgeous writing and beautiful BJ scene. YAY!
xo
bornonhalloween chapter 24 . 4/3/2016
awww trust. I understand how he feels he's failed her by allowing himself (in some sense of the word) to "forget" her (again). Ouch. Well trusting her is a fantastic start to forgiving himself I think! YAY!
xoxo
bornonhalloween chapter 23 . 4/3/2016
Hot Dogus interruptus? BAHAHAHA! Oh man, there was a lot of juicy goodness here, and I have no idea what has him so upset. Maybe he can't imagine that he could taste as good to her as she does to him? I loved their talk about dating. I love how he thinks but WOW, what a challenge!
xo
bornonhalloween chapter 22 . 4/2/2016
Well that was one hell of a description of music! Holy smokes! Is that what it's like for you? Very moving. I loved the scene in the store and the very, very wise shop owner. Way to go, Aro!

I love this little "development" of the story and what it causes Bella to learn about Edward but mostly about herself and her assumptions. I love that he's not upset but I feel like she's going to beat herself up over that for a while.
Sigh...
bornonhalloween chapter 21 . 4/2/2016
Excellent. I love how you used Edward to show Tanya's depth there. That was a wonderful interchange. It's great to see how the lovebirds play off each other when there are other people in the scene. Loved it!
xo
bornonhalloween chapter 20 . 4/2/2016
Aww, of COURSE he doesn't care to look at Tanya's rack, and HOW ADORABLE he's picked her up at work for lunch~
Also, I kind of love that he doesn't feel the need to kiss her there and prefers to hold her hand.
Love the frank discussion and the unpolitically correct, who probably asked out loud what most people in RL would be wondering. I love that you're not scared of any of this. It's AWESOME!
xo
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