Reviews for Assault
Pokabu chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
Oooh, does Gold know a bit more than he's letting on? Anyway, I really enjoyed this! I liked the added bit with Red worrying over his Pokemon instead of his own well-being. Sounds like something he'd do.
pokemaster101 chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Can you say KAWAIINESS? 333333333

Keep it up! 8DDDDD
Nobody chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
You need to work on your grammar.
ColdBlueGirl chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Awesome story! I enjoyed reading it to the end. Continue with the great work!
hikarinayoshi chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
luv!
Nekokratik chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Awww! So fluffy XD Its so sweet, I like it :)
B chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Is your first language English? Do you have a beta? I see some grammar mistakes... and you seem to be alternating between verb tenses quite a few times. Please stick to the first one you use when you write; it's one or the other, not both. "Were," instead of "was," and such. Some of your dialogue seems a bit stiff, too, and it's best that you don't be too familiar to the reader or use casual sayings. Try to "show, don't tell," in your writing.
Kiyoumi chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Lance at the end! xD

Gee, this is so cute! Made me giggle and smile, so it's a sweet pick me up! Nice, really!

I love this, and hope to read more from you. c:
OrgasmicYaoi chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
I adore how caring Red is with his pokemon. Green deserves a kiss for helping Red out of the situation with Lance. Though I do have a respect for the pairing of LancexRed. GreenxRed seems more appropriate.
BloodyLies chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Love the Green/Red pairing 3

and the story was fantastic!
swirlhearty23 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
I totally loved this, you should of made a second chapter to this!
Kari chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
It was wonderful I loved it so much a little shy red hiding his feelings genius
Kari chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
It was wonderful I loved it so much a little shy red hiding his feelings genius