Reviews for To Shape and Change
Fenris Jin chapter 26 . 7/30
It's so much easier to share information among Puffs.. There is minimal risk in them sharing information with others outside their circle. Loyalty sure is convenient. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 24 . 7/30
I'm thinking that the dark depressing tones of the story will comes from Severus's past(..or future? I'm a bit confused.. xD). Hopefully, things turn out the better in the new time line. Hopefully...
Fenris Jin chapter 23 . 7/30
No, Dumbles! We're only onto first year, we can't lose you yet!

I'm just waiting for Snape to say it.. Considering the attack on the Ministry was in Harry's 5th year, and his only just finished his first.. "That escalated quickly" comes to mind. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 20 . 7/30
I never thought Draco insulting someone would be endearing.. But when he does it in Potter's defense, one must admit, it really is so sweet of him. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 19 . 7/30
When the attack started at the dorm, I was thinking that Smith might turn hero after all.. And then Trevor made his momentous leap. Certainly took me by surprise. xD

Cedric aiding Harry after the battle was a surprise, but it was nice. We all kind of swept him under the rug after GoF, so it's nice to see him in Hupplepuff.
Fenris Jin chapter 18 . 7/30
Looks like the Troll didn't make an appearance.. but Norbert did! ..or Norberta I mean. xD

Oh noes! Snape!
Fenris Jin chapter 17 . 7/30
Slytherin brotherhood! It's making me teary eyed. The fluffiness! When Flint carried Harry, I even forgot he was a Hupplepuff and not a snake. *sniffs* It's so sweet. And they say snakes were cold blooded.
Fenris Jin chapter 16 . 7/30
Well, looks like it was a good move from the Malfoys to have given him Dobby after all.. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 14 . 7/30
I forgot to note last chapter. I share sentiments with Snape, about gifted individuals losing purpose because they have difficulty finding self fulfillment. That's part of the reason I was dubious to Harry's 'miracles'.

Oh, looks like the backlash I've been expecting from the white magic is coming now? Or maybe it's the exposure to the vaccine? People sometimes get sick when given shots. I don't know how that exposure would translate in magic.
Fenris Jin chapter 13 . 7/30
I suppose I can work with the vaccine idea. It's sound reasoning somewhat.
Fenris Jin chapter 12 . 7/30
I'm quite please with how everyone was interacting. The Christmas Event at the Malfoys was nice. I actually facepalmed at Pansy's comment though. Did she just say "eww?" at a snake? She's in Slythterin! Blasphemy I say! xD

Well, at least we know Dobby is with Harry now. LOL, I take it this is going to be one of the perks of not having Hermione in his group of friends.

I'm not sure about this eleven year old healing wonder Harry. It's too perfect, I'm afraid he won't learn vital lessons one learns with failure. He doesn't even suffer any backlash.

His magic is overcoming hundreds of years of impossibility(healing lycantrophy) even at a tender age(Eleven!) I fear to see him when he's an adult. He'd be god-like, limitless.. and as humans, we need limitations or else we will never learn to value the simplest things in life..

Or maybe perhaps we will follow the saying, a candle that burns twice as bright, burns twice as fast? That would really be depressing though.
Fenris Jin chapter 9 . 7/30
Well.. Remus is here which is good.. But will Harry learn the Patronus without the threats of the Dementors? Hmm..

I didn't realize Tonks was in her 7th year when Potter first entered Hogwarts.
Fenris Jin chapter 8 . 7/29
Just a medical note. Third degree burns penetrates past the skin and onto muscles. Meaning, no skin is left, unless you count the leathery bits. You'd lose a chunk of flesh that never grows back before it's considered a 3rd degree. Not sure if that's the mental image were going here. ;P

I like how the Puffs are loyal. They don't go around changing sides when they are faced with the unknown, like in Harry's case his magic outburst. The Lions like jumping to conclusions and pointing fingers.

Cedric is nice. I suppose he's going to have to be the older House mate.. Like say Fred and George without the pranks and more responsible? Oh no wait, he's like Percy, without the stick up his arse. xD I wonder how this will translate to GoF.. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 7 . 7/29
Poor Draco. Well, at least it proves that Neville really tends to have unlucky streaks.. Who'd have thought that it really was the broom's fault and not his? xD

If Draco owed Harry a life debt. Neville owes Malfoy the same. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 6 . 7/29
It nice that Harry doesn't have to fight Tommy boy with Snape's knowledge of the future events.. I'm worried though that Harry won't have enough experience?
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