Reviews for To Shape and Change |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was a story worth reading twice. Thank you for writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to say, bravo! You have used foreshadowing so well! You were able to put in Madame hooch‘s request earlier in the story that she gets more brooms, and it foreshadowed into this chapter. You are very talented writer and your skills at giving your characters. More depth is very well done. You are very very much becoming a favorite of mine. Keep up the good work! You are very talented and I really like your portrayal of Albus Dumbledore, I’d have to admit, I kind of like some of the bashing stories you know, but I like this one where he just kind of got, overwhelmed, and regrets, he’s more human in the story. He regrets what he do you know that he put him there but you can’t change the past and you’re making your characters a lot more human you’re showing their regrets. I can’t wait to see how you develop the Malfoy family I really like the family and I think they should be shown in a more positive light as people who were just trying to make the best decisions out of a bad situation they realize too late they messed up but that’s my personal opinion but I really do love your stories and I’m going on with my reading great work! |
![]() ![]() C'était vraiment magnifique à lire Merci pour cette histoire |
![]() ![]() -Helping Harry to improve his magic -Being honest with him of his origins -Improving his life conditions In one chapter Severus did everything that Dumbledore didn't in seven books |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of the greatest and well written ficts I've read in a long time, I enjoyed my stay (hehe). Thank you for creating this, and bless... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an incredible ride, 10/10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bro become jesus of wizarding world |
![]() ![]() The Fact that he went to Huffelpuff of all places just ruined this story |
![]() ![]() The ending paragraph, makes your heart hurt, but there is a light from it that is clear and pure that it talks about. |
![]() ![]() Full circle |
![]() ![]() It’s hard to go to sleep after reading this one, hurts ah. She was full of love for him. |
![]() ![]() That was also frightening Your writing is amazing! |
![]() ![]() Ohhhh This was terrifying Severus Snape! |
![]() ![]() Those defenses are nothing to scoff at..dumbeldore's mind xD |
![]() ![]() This chapter was so interesting and just imagining the Professor gang at the hospital, wow. And Severus making us cry:} he's grown up into a strong loving person |