|Reviews for Taken by a Killer|
| chloejames 111 chapter 6 . 2/9
I LOVE your fic so far, just ignore the haters. If they have a problem with it why are they reading it? Stupid idiots. Anyway, update soon please! xxx
| alexis chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
Really come on don't write a good story only to stop at two chapters. I say this again everyone listen to this DON'T WRITE A STORY IF YOU'RE NOT GOING TO FINISH IT. I loved the first two chapters and wanted to see how Bella would react when she woke up. Please don't stop the story let someone else have it or finish it yourself. Please tell us the next owner of this story. Thanks
| Lacrosse Girl 42 chapter 6 . 12/4/2013
What's wrong with you? Every other chapter is you pissing and moaning. How bout you actually do some writing for a change?
| Lorrie Gorber chapter 5 . 4/13/2013
There :) See I reviewed every chapter because that IS why you keep this story up right? Do unto others as you would have others do unto you [Matthew 7:12]. Integrity is a sad thing to lose. Someone trusted you with something they put effort into, it means something to them even if it no longer holds any value to you. The least you can do is give them THEIR story back if you no longer want it but that is expected too much from you. Other authors who adopt stories do that and thanks to you I have such new respect for them. If this leads to another "chapter", because that appears to be your style, thanks for the attention diva but I'm not you so I don't need it.
| Lorrie Gorber chapter 4 . 4/13/2013
To think had she just given this story to someone else this would be a chapter and not another (surprise! not) authors note.
| Lorrie Gorber chapter 3 . 4/13/2013
I'd review here but this is where her genius stops.
| Lorrie Gorber chapter 2 . 4/13/2013
("I don't want your hand, little boy, I want to know why you did it!" She pointed a finger at him.
He looked down at her with amusement in his eyes. "What if I don't want to tell you?"
Charlie sat back, enjoying the show with a smirk on his face.
"Then I guess I'm going to have to shoot you!" That made Charlie burst out laughing.
Edward, resisting a smile, leaned forward so that his face was inches away from her. He gave her the looked that would send any child running for their mommy. But Bella mirrored his face, not once backing down.
He fell hard right there.
"Shoot me all you want sweetheart, but I'm never going to speak." Edward then leaned back with a smug grin on his face.
Bella suddenly slammed her fist on the table, causing everyone to jump at the sudden noise. She moved so she was right in his face. "Why can't you admit that you are the one who stole the cookies from the cookie jar!"
Edward couldn't hold it anymore. A big gust of laughter filled the room, Bella had to stand back and hold her ears. When he finally calmed down, he couldn't resist saying the words: "Who,
Edward smiled. "You are a very cute little girl, Miss Isabella."
Bella giggle and blushed brightly. "Why, thank you, Mr. Edward.")
Helper oh my fucking god please continue your story. It is amazing. You are amazing! I can't even put it into words how much I love this story I saw you as a rec by some authors I love on a website and I'm so happy I found you. TBAK ftw!
| Lorrie Gorber chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Your story is done so well and uniquely I'm speechless.
| Lorrie Gorber chapter 6 . 4/13/2013
She gave you an 'okay' to write the story, which firstly, you are not doing, and secondly, is not an okay to give the story to someone else who you, of all people, deem fit. No offense but I don't trust your judgment, integrity and overall just you because of your behaviour. Aside from being very rude and arrogant, for a published author you have many comprehension issues. Go into show business. Your drama will take you far there. For now, all you are accomplishing is convincing your readers that you are whiny, attention seeking and rude. Very unimpressive. I hope you grow up.
| dev.d.66 chapter 6 . 8/2/2012
ACTUALLY, when you put a story up for adoption and give someone the okay to HAVE it, it becomes THEIR story. Yours originally, yes, but you have no right to get all mad at the person for simply growing out of it and wanting to give it a new home.
Kudos to you for coming back to finish what you started, but being a brat isn’t going to get you a nice following. Sorry for ranting but, shit! You’re being very immature and she had every right to pass the story along. Maybe if the plot was developed more and there was a beta involved, it wouldn’t be getting passed around as much as a Russian prostitute. And someone would know what to do with it.
Onto constructive and less destructive.
It is easy to find a beta on fanfiction, you just need to find that si interested in your story and knows what they are doing. One or two pre-readers will do you wonders. I think this story could be very interesting if you did those things.
I say start fresh, change the name to something simpler, change the summary to something that draws people in and check your grammar. Feel out the emotions behind every word, every expression, every head nod, before you post. It will be worth the wait in the end.
| Bloody Hearts chapter 5 . 8/1/2012
Its sad that you wont be continue TbaK but I understand :) But thank you for the first chapters! Im sure that gave many ideas for their storys!
| Secretsouls7 chapter 6 . 7/28/2012
That not what hwstn said in her author note so... I trust that note over your words anyday. You have an act for not being honest...
| UpYourCupcake chapter 6 . 7/27/2012
Wow...it's lovely all the drama being thrown around. I opened this up to read a story and there are several chapters of announcements and then tons of fucking stupid ass comments. Post the fucking story, fuck everyone else who's hating!
| SweetiePieSaysHi chapter 6 . 7/27/2012
I think you are the one with no rights to give it away like that without talking to her first. Other people that take on someone's story and don't want them anymore give I back to the owner of the story so she can deside who will get it! She has every right to be pissed sense she has done the whole wok while you did practly nothin rather then coming with excuses. Grown as a writer? You didn't write any of this and if you grown you would have continued. I read you other works which quit frankly sucked.
You wanted the person that would take this story onto write in your view? People that adopt Adopt the plot and they will write in their own pov, just like you could do with this but you didn't even write one word of your own as a part of a chapter.
| JCLadybug chapter 6 . 7/27/2012
You know there is such a thing as PM. I'm actually surprised I saw this b/c it isn't something that I keep tabs on. My observations are valid whether you like to here it or not and I got it all from your story and the reviews. I did look up the original author out of curiosity and the first two chapters are very similar to the point that people would assume they are the same story. If those chapters remain mostly intact then it is confusing for readers, especially if the title stays the same.