Reviews for Arsenic and Red Lace
Cathartes chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Ooh, you're back! I love your fic. This is lovely, but I had one tiny objection: why is Rocklin always italicized? For some reason it was driving me nuts! Otherwise, perfect, you do team banter so well and I was cracking up. Thanks for sharing!
Aquila1 chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Not a chapter to try and slip in during a quiet moment at work. I've been biting my cheek to stifle nearly continuous giggles. I especially loved the nursing home names. An excellent start, as always. Looking forward to the next instalment.
swenglish chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
WOW you're such a great writer. I like the way you've started the story and I'm all excited to see what happends next. I know its sick but I wanna see what the stomach flu does to our psycic :) Keep on the great work and I look forward to more. Please update soon again :)
BumblyBee3 chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
love! -
govgal chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Too funny! Can't wait for more!
klcarr892 chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
I love your team banter. Everyone is in character perfectly. This is a great start and I'm looking forward to more ;o)
Jisbon4ever chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
LOL...Rigsby and his peanuts. You are really good in detail and writing cases. The banter was spot on and everyone was IC. I hope you continue soon.
immortalruby chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Wow, this is pretty good! Looking forward to more chapters.
Jonesyfu chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Wonderfully entertaining! I, too, love the awesome banter - very much in character but simultaneously fresh and witty. Very much like an episode - with tantalizing promise of some h/c lurking in the near future? Thanks - can't wait to see where you take this! :)
Traveler of Worlds chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Anybody want a peanut? This looks exciting. I love the banter and can't wait for more.
Purple Piggie chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Yay! You're back in action! I was so excited to see you are writing a new story - and it sounds like there will be some Jane pain in it? My favourite! Your writing is hilarious as usual and very enjoyable to read.

Breathlessly awaiting Chapter 2...
yaba chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Heee, you're back. YAY YAY YAY! I love this idea, the summary was pretty sweet too. I love how Jane is at his best in this chapter, tricking everyone in sight. I love it when he bates Rigsby, poor guy just never gets a break. I also definitely liked the VP/Jane dynamic in this and Lisbon's at her "bossy" best. I am definitely looking towards more.

Quick question. What's the timeline on this? It's obviously set post 2.17, which is when Hightower is introduced, but I'm curious. Anyway, can't wait for more!

Alamo Girl chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
WOOT! I love this already.

I love the playfulness and the thought of the great Patrick Jane being taken down by stomach flu.

Also, Jane referring to his 'marks' as "victims" is interesting. And Lisbon being surrounded by ten year olds. That was hilarious.

I prefer "Prolonging the Inevitable retirement home" though. HEE!
mwalter1 chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
That was great! Thanks for the good laugh. I really needed that today.
Aqua Mage chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
I love your writing. Seriously, it's like an actual episode; you have the characters' voices down really well. Looking forward to more!
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