| Reviews for The Angel of My Lost Past |
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   ephemeralphosphenes chapter 4 . 12/1/2012 Its black OPS no C... |
| sneha chapter 8 . 3/28/2012 girl you got me hooked to your stories like no one else please continue ur so good at it |
| sneha chapter 1 . 3/28/2012 hey dominique you have nice imagination the story was great i loved it please continue |
| CarlisleAndBella'sLove chapter 7 . 1/16/2012 i'm liking this story so much! i really hope you update soon :D i also really would like for Emma to be Rosalie's daughter,that would be awesome! :D x |
| shailie nieves chapter 7 . 12/28/2011 Aww ditooo!:( seth you misunderstood baby!_ I LOE YOU MUCHO AND I COULDNT STAND YOU BEAUTY SO I HAD TO GOO! Please dont leave me!D': omg hahaha ant wait for he next one! |
| SU chapter 6 . 10/30/2011 KEEP WRITING! |
| SU chapter 1 . 10/30/2011 Awesome Keep writing |
| shailie nieves chapter 6 . 7/3/2011 :OO oh snap! what am i ganna do to seth? oh craaaccckkkheeaaaddd! lol cant wait for the next update!:) |
| SummerinDecember chapter 6 . 6/27/2011 Wow this story is getting goood! Update asap |
| shailie nieves chapter 5 . 4/26/2011 omg! im so sorry i havent reviewed in a while! D: i've been super duper busy and havent had anytime at all to do much of ANY READING! i just read chapter five and i loved it! i cant wait to hear from emma! i'll be sure to keep up with the reading this time! lol much love~ shailie nieves |
| atwtlover chapter 5 . 4/5/2011 Loved it! Please write more soon! I really want to know who Emma is! |
| FallenBleedingAngel chapter 5 . 4/2/2011 O.O please write more i beg you ! i can't wait for the next chapter ! |
| NegligibleNaina chapter 5 . 4/2/2011 I have a feeling that Seth and Jake are gonna be in the "doghouse" :) oh the irony! |
| heatlmo chapter 1 . 1/27/2011 Great story Dommie. Very creative. I can't wait to read the next chapter! I would like to hear more from the authors perspective rather than dialog from the characters. For example; the story is created in Alice's POV. Who is describing the little girl, Alice or the author? I got a bit lost in there during her description. If you break up the paragraphs, I believe it might be clearer to understand as well as allow the reader to follow along with the development of your characters and their interaction with one another. Please write another and another. I'm hooked. As for Jessavi's review. While I apppreciate your direction and critique, she is only 13 and has not yet had ample time to exercise her creative writing skills, as I mentioned, she is 13. I would appreciate it, as would others I believe if you would limit your reviews to only mild constructive criticism and elaborate with any praise that may cross your mind. This site is not an SAT tutorial nor a forum to cast judgement on one's lack of experience as a uber polished writer. Thank you |
| shailie nieves chapter 4 . 1/18/2011 lmao i love the way i am lol im a bada**! okay sooo...who imprinted on me? i need to know |