Reviews for Misguided Angel
TaraJo chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
Absolutely lovely! You paint so beautiful images with your words, it's simpy awesome!
Burntcore chapter 2 . 11/7/2010
wow, that was cool to see from Edward's pov now.
Burntcore chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Something a little different. loved it... off to read the next chapter.
WingsOfEyeliner chapter 2 . 11/6/2010
That was so hot, sexy and beautiful babe! Absolutely loved 3
RenaDoll chapter 2 . 11/5/2010
Simply beautiful. *sniffs and wipes away a tear*
RenaDoll chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
Um wow, I'm nearly speechless.

Romantic, hot, sexy and definitely sigh worthy.
Gasaway Alley chapter 2 . 11/5/2010
"Between his legs that I stroked open, I sank. Four days of bearded growth rubbed his thighs, up and down until he jumped and belted beneath me. My chapped lips pursed, and I pulled his erection in, and it was more luxurious than anything I'd ever tasted.

He knotted his hands into my moist hair and wrenched me away. His cock was saturated with venom and a deep purple color, beating pulsing veins wrapped it like satin ribbons, the most sensual present.

I wanted him in me.

The shadow-light of the fire was hot and hellish and heavenly."

May I start with a snowy - flurry - steamy - swirly - cock swallowing love?

May I end with a scene so endearing, it makes the very insides of my knees ache?

"I did understand Jasper, finally.

And all I knew was love, thoroughly.

I put my lips to his throat while he held me into sleep, mumbling quietly, "I want to be with you, Jasper. Not just for this life, while I age and you remain unchanged. I want to be with you, Jasper, for the rest of our life."

I had my heart of gold."

You astound, astonish, and surround us readers with your heart of gold.

loves and Oh's - Apie
Gasaway Alley chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
Do you sleep? For someone with a broken laptop, you bang the hell out of a story.

The way you outline these creatures is spell binding. The swell of his body, the brawn of his forearms, the black feathers of his eyelashes is heady indeed. Vampire!

Ever growing and ever knowing, these two spin into a sexual web rife with sexual proclivity, staggering even the most sedate parts of the body.

Plucky and lovely, your scenes fill me with want, and leave me unfulfilled, yet full to the brim with the promise of seduction's sweet kiss.

I'm on to the next to see what you've cooked up in that curvy, swervy mind of yours.

xoxo - Sis
LoveDanielsNuts chapter 2 . 11/5/2010
I FUCKING LOVED THAT!

Those 2 together are all types of HOT, but it was nice to see them together and in love, and not just fucking for a change.

Well done babe, that was AWESOME!
BilliCullen chapter 2 . 11/4/2010
"I put my lips to his throat while he held me into sleep, mumbling quietly, "I want to be with you, Jasper. Not just for this life, while I age and you remain unchanged. I want to be with you, Jasper, for the rest of our life."

THAT is simply beautiful!

Bravo to a wonderful second chapter Rie!

I loved it.
Ealasaid77 chapter 2 . 11/4/2010
Still beautifully written.
TwifanUK chapter 2 . 11/4/2010
Loved seeing it all from Edwards POV. How he was really feeling after find out avout Jasper being a vampire. His fear battling with his love for him.

I gives it a new spin and shows just how much they love each other.

Love it xxxx
Viola Cornuta chapter 2 . 11/4/2010
my boys, mine mine mine mine mine
TwifanUK chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
Wow, that was hot, heartfelt and beautiful (yeah, it's past 1am and I couldn't think of another word beginning with 'h').

'But Edward sat between my legs, shook his head, and made me watch him as he took both our cocks in his two hands and rubbed venom to cum and cock to dick until thinking, focusing, looking, breathing became futile efforts.'

jeez, such imagery.

As usual Rie, a beautifully written piece that captures you in everyway.

I'm not usually a fan of slash, but the love between Edward and Jasper was exceptionally well portrayed.

Bravo.

Jo xx
k.eynon0406 chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
WOW!that was amazing.x
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