|Reviews for Ultimate Comics: X23|
| Jetman21 chapter 3 . 12/3/2011
This is interesting. Most interesting...
| Nerdman3000 chapter 3 . 1/29/2011
This is a very interesting story, and I find myself facsinated by it. Please update soon.
| Dusel chapter 3 . 11/27/2010
Wow, pfew, for a second I thought Fury would let loose Hawkeye on Jummy's parents.
| Dusel chapter 2 . 11/27/2010
You know what's funny? Really funny? It's that the dialog is like it's taken strait out of an Ultimate Comics, since they all either blab it all back or rapidely talk back and fourth. Though...put a little more emotion into it OK? I could picture it easily since I've read Ultimate X but there aren't really any emotions weaved into your story, no shock, no drama, no exiliration and awe. Work on that, K?