Reviews for You Were Everything
ally leigh chapter 3 . 10/23/2010
Another good chapter! Paul and Mar's day together was super cute. At this point I am trying to wrap my head around the status of their imprint, I guess Paul is going to be what Mar needs most? Which obviously isn't a husband right now, and it is kind of a pang in my heart whenever Finn is brought up. Although, I really am still trying to remain optimistic for now. Also, just out of curiosity, what kind of books does Mar write? Leah trying to needle was sad and I am hoping that we will see more of Leah. Glad that we were able to see a few of the Pack. Anyways, can't wait to read more!
ally leigh chapter 2 . 10/23/2010
Good chapter! I've really missed your stories. At the end of the first chapter I was hoping against hope that maybe Paul wouldn't imprint on Mar, to avoid the heartache. Of course, I really also wanted him to because the first chapter was so cute. I am trying to remain optimistic about Finn, and think that he must have some redeeming qualities. Although, whenever he refers to the 'babymaking factory' I was a little creeped out and wanted to punch him in the nose. Also, the Pack guys trying to cover for Paul was amusing and awkward. Off to the next chapter!
Twilighter80 chapter 3 . 10/23/2010
Just so you know, I love you at the moment. 3 You updated again. lol
MintCcIceCream chapter 3 . 10/23/2010
Aw poor Paul! I really can't wait to see what's going to happen in this story! I like Finn, but obviously I can't stand to see Paul so sad without Marilyn! Oh and I now picture Finn as Cory Monteith; the name stuck, and he's adorable anyway! So good luck writing and with life and everything! LOVE THE STORY AND CHAPTER! UPDATE SOON!

Love,

MintCcIceCream
Jenni Drocks chapter 3 . 10/23/2010
This is such a good story! I did a double take when I noticed Marilyn was married. I just wanna give Paul a hug, cuz that must really suck! Can not wait for the next chapter!

xXx
taybaybay chapter 2 . 10/23/2010
Yaaay! I love your stories!(: Please hurry and update because I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Twilighter80 chapter 2 . 10/23/2010
Poor Paul needs huggles! I must admit, I was sad when I saw she was married...I was like, no! She's gotta get together with Paul! lol
MintCcIceCream chapter 2 . 10/22/2010
Aw! I can tell this is going to be a really good story! I can't wait! Poor Paul, I kind of like Finn though, but that could just be my bias towards the glee reference... Anyways, good luck writing and with life and everything! LOVE THE STORY! UPDATE SOON!

Love,

MintCcIceCream
Midguided-Angel chapter 2 . 10/22/2010
love it update soon please
Twilighter80 chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Oh come on! What is with everyone and cliffhangers? I just got a bad cliffhanger from my tv show. lol. Can't wait to read more. ;)
ally leigh chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Yay, a new Paul story. I must admit I am very intrigued to see if Paul imprints on someone, especially Marilyn. I had to read it twice when the husband was first mentioned, definitely a new twist. The first part where Paul and Marilyn meet was super cute, I love that the T-Rex was shared. Her Grandma seems sweet and I can't wait for Paul to enter the story. I can't wait to read more!
DiaDeLosMuertos chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
great first chapter! hope you update soon )
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