|Reviews for Dawn|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
this reminds me of the song darkside by kelly clarkson for some reason, and reminds me of all the other stories like this one, where astrids feeling r changing 4 hiccup but that could be just me...
| Pinnatus chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Love it! Love the movie and I always enjoying reading author's interpretations of what happens between the last 2 scenes, especially when they're at the dragon's nest. Beautiful characterization of Astrid and of Toothless. The whole series is perfect.
| Primi-tan chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
I've always liked the elaborate idea's people come up with on the aftermath from the battle with that dragon. From your idea of them being stuck on the island to Hiccup being trasnported back to Berk via back of a dragon while Astrid tries to keep his delusional thrasing at bay. It's so angtsy~
And somehow, they all have one thing in common: The amputation of Hiccup's leg. Dreamworks couldn't elaborate on it due to the rating, but that's what us FFN writers are for~ _-
Looking forward to reading the next one!
| LeiaOrganicSolo chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
You have no idea how relieved I am that I'm not the only one who thought the ending could have been extremely angst-tastic. Whenever I talk of how they probably had to amputate the leg on that island with no herbs or anything and that Hiccup probably suffered post traumatic stress or something, people just look at me funny, then proceed to walk away or tell me it's "just a cartoon."
Um, no. No it's not DX
Ha ha but you have an amazing skill, and have these characters down. You might as well have written the stories to begin with!
And I'll get around to reviewing all of your stories as soon as possible, I swear! Please keep writing!
| HotChocolate in Summer chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
O.O Dude, I'm only on the very first chapter of this entrie triogly and I love it. I am SOOOOOOO reading the rest.
| harley chapter 2 . 11/13/2010
loved it, but next time add some talking.
| Gumdrop Boo - Ch4rms chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
UH. A big YES to 'I liked it'
You did a great job :) I especially admire how you managed to do it with 0 dialogue. You're vocabulary usage is so finessed, I love it!
Hiccup's leg getting cauterized, yikes! There are so many ways I've seen people write how it gets taken care of, that after events before he wakes up in the latter part of 'Where's Hiccup?'
I like this a lot :)
| Valor Grim chapter 2 . 10/28/2010
I have to say, it was some pretty awesome work. Good job, my friend. I thoroughly look forward to reading the next installment. Keep up the good work!
| Sumizome chapter 2 . 10/28/2010
please write a sequel :)
| Garrynessftw chapter 2 . 10/28/2010
| Star chapter 2 . 10/28/2010
I like it :D no one really writes about what happened during the blank before Hiccup wakes up
| just me chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Good one! I like how you had stuff about Toothless being injured too (Toothless bouncing around hale and hearty and as helpful as he wanna be the day after fight can be fun to read but also seems less in-character for how he looked in the movie). It'll turn out that between the cauterizing and the bandaging the healer did some stitching (to cover the cut ends of Hiccup's leg muscles and bone with skin since cauterization alone can't close *that* big an opening), right?
| ByStarlight999 chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
This is really good! I especially love the last line- it's... I don't know. Sad, yet hopeful. It's perfect. :)
Please, please, please post the next chapter. Please?
| nightfury chapter 2 . 10/28/2010
| blank00001 chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
oh keep going please! this was fantastic! its going in my favorites and will be keeping a sharp eye on it :) just brilliant!