|Reviews for What's Wrong With Sam?|
| BettaPen chapter 10 . 8/19/2013
Haha, Crowley is now 'Fergus'. XP
However if I was Crowley I wouldn't be amused, I would be annoyed. Though I think Dean's 'charm' would set me back on the 'amused and I will humor you' train. dX
This story is really, really getting good!
| BettaPen chapter 9 . 8/19/2013
Ooooh, that's got to burn for Dean using that line! But it's a good thing Sam is Soulless. :(
Also I love the interactions between Crowley and Bobby! Then Dean saying, "They make such a cute couple." XD
I like that you wrote how Bobby sees Sam and Dean in his head. :) It's so sad that Bobby dies! TmT
I tear up at the thought. :''''C
P.S: I LOVE Soulless Sam's sense of humor!
| BettaPen chapter 8 . 8/19/2013
Poor Bobby having to hear them to bicker at each other back and forth. Yet I think it's smart that Bobby is just trying to get down to business instead of getting involved with Dean and Sam's issues.
| BettaPen chapter 7 . 8/19/2013
Dean, Dean, Dean, Dean...DEAN! D: Have some self-control!
I can't help, but feel a bit bad for Sam. I mean Dean is saying all this stuff to Sam about him that is offensive and horrible. It may not hurt Sam right now without a Soul, but about when Sam has a Soul? However I am sure that will be just ''eh'' to Sam as he remembers what he did without a Soul.
I still feel bad for Sam regardless. Soulless or with Soul. :/
This story is definitely in my favorites list! :3
| BettaPen chapter 6 . 8/19/2013
Sam pays Dean for taking his line and Dean takes the money with a nod like, "Pleasure doing business with you, little brother." :) This is the best Soulless Sammy story I read! :D
And I agree with you about Bobby, he does take too much responsibility with the boys. He deserves a break from the 'Parent' business. :3
| BettaPen chapter 5 . 8/19/2013
No I think Bobby is wrong about Sam getting his feelings hurt...In all honesty I don't think Sam can give two craps about Dean's opinion about him. I think Sam can get annoyed and frustrated about Dean's nagging to him about being a 'robot' and all. Yet who knows maybe Sam can get a bit hurt by Dean, I mean Dean is his brother. So yeah. Bobby may be actually right, but I doubt it.
Also I laughed when Dean got happy over getting a dictionary! I guess Bobby gave Dean's Christmas present early. Now what does Sam got to give? A Thesaurus? :D This story is awesome!
| BettaPen chapter 4 . 8/19/2013
That part killed me. XD
| BettaPen chapter 3 . 8/18/2013
I don't blame Dean for not liking Grandpa Samuel. Not. At. All.
| BettaPen chapter 2 . 8/18/2013
I can't help, but laugh when Sam is freaking out over getting tortured the same way as the kid (poor boy btw). I really like your story so far!
| BettaPen chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
I can just imagine Dean just saying, "HA!", only then to get confused as hell hearing the 'Other than his soul' part. I just had to laugh at the end, this is really interesting! :D
| casammy chapter 15 . 10/3/2011
Excellent history, it was my favorite chapter, when dean managed that the soul of this sam of return and to bring again to us our sweet and adorabñe sammy puppy eyes
| SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 4 . 8/3/2011
Hey you, this is a good story, I'm liking it a lot.
| Bella Dayenu chapter 8 . 5/7/2011
This line made me smile...
"That's like the biggest first in my book. Sam Winchester not sticking his nose in where it doesn't belong. This is all just so…Twilight Zone."
(I'm re-reading again...getting more comments in. lol)
| Bella Dayenu chapter 5 . 5/3/2011
The conversation/banter in this chapter is AMAZING and spot on. Just plain lovely. I felt myself being sucked right into the conversation which is what every reader wants. Nicely done.
| Bella Dayenu chapter 4 . 5/3/2011
I adore this line
"I think it would be best if you boys came home to do the summoning."
It made me smile so much.