Reviews for White Noise
Katherine Sanderson chapter 1 . 3/25
This was great! I love that you didn't stupify Edward (even if I don't really like Twilight that much) because wether you like him or not all the bashing is getting annoying.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/22
Yes! Mobster America! And mafia italies. Awesomeness!
Missingwings chapter 1 . 3/22
Surprisingly... I really like this. I like the idea, and the interaction was interesting. As for the Italian brothers helping Alfred and Matthew... I like that idea. Nice job!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
what?
I AM AWESOME chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
...what
Kadda chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
This was very well written! Kudos to you!
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
Oh woow...

Totally liked it!
Clio chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
I read it! It's actually very good. Better than the overly done love plot of the actual story. I'm on here for twilight bashing, but you've managed to fix the story. I like this.
urufushinigami chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
wow, I was really surprised. this story was well thought out and nicely done, good job.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
Hmm...what kind of compliment to give when most of the ones I was going to say were already given by other reviewers? Well, one thing I notice is your excellent attention to detail. You crafted every single little sentence perfectly, which made the whole thing flow smoothly. I also liked how you mentioned the "48" on the back of America's jacket-looks like I'm not the only one who cares about historical continuity! And it's little things like those that make certain stories a step above others. Thank you for sharing your exceptional ability to write. This was truly brilliant.
TheAmazingGenie chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Wait, your brother has a copy of twilight?
keeper chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
This story actually make the countries seem as majestic as they actually should be. :-) I like it!
neko1998 chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
OH please make them meet again! It would make a really cute Edward x America TT
neoneco chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
I liked it! It gave an interesting perspective. What would the countries think about all those supernatural creatures living in their midst? Poor England, they've been letting him think he's the only one.
DianeJasmine chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Wow...

That was...

Good?

I say that, because I don't normally like serious Twilight stories, and I really liked that!
So cudos to you for being amazing.

Bye bye!
K
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