Reviews for New Life in White
bluedoor chapter 16 . 12/11/2016
More please
Pegeen chapter 4 . 11/16/2016
Enjoying the story very much so far - so many possibilities!
Grammar point: should have or should've NOT should of
Guest chapter 16 . 8/7/2016
I hope you eventually finish this. I guess they aren't the kin from elven bane after all but have some similarities.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/7/2016
If they are elvenbane dragons they referred to themselves as the kin.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/7/2016
Affronted not upfronted
Guest chapter 3 . 8/7/2016
Savil was already reborn as Kerowyn's companion in by the sword. Even if Kerowyn died early Kris' reign would be too soon for her to come back as a herald or a companion.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/7/2016
I'm liking it so far. The dragon comes from the elvenbane series doesn't it?
Guest chapter 10 . 5/28/2016
i believe a 6 year old horse would be an adult. but since companions aren't horses, you have some leeway :P
Guest chapter 7 . 5/28/2016
interesting story. but please learn the differences between your/you're, their/there/they're, to/two/too, buts/butts... and yes. yes i am the spelling and grammar nazi. but seriously, it's distracting, and quite frankly i'd prefer to just enjoy the story :)
Guest chapter 16 . 1/29/2016
This is still as amazing as the first time I read it. PLEASE continue your awesome story~I really want to see more of Gadriel and Dalina!
Chantilly's Mom chapter 16 . 3/21/2015
cute story...where's it going?
goldenruhl chapter 16 . 11/1/2014
please continue this story I love it pam is definately interested lol can they marry a human?
Guest chapter 16 . 9/23/2014
Nice I will keep an eye on this story. Can't wait for the next chapter! Great job!
wendums chapter 16 . 7/25/2014
Different. Hope we don't wait as long for next chapters
wendums chapter 12 . 7/24/2014
When did the word 'dude' get into Valdemars vocabulary. Pml
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