|Reviews for Here in the Garden of Sin|
| Angellovee chapter 10 . 3/1
I'm scared to guess, maybe she thinks that he'll feed and be able to let her go.
| Angellovee chapter 9 . 3/1
| Angellovee chapter 8 . 3/1
At this rate she's going to be immune to his venom. I want to slap him and tell him to fill some syringes!
| Angellovee chapter 5 . 2/28
could he be lying so she won't trust anyone else in the family?
| Angellovee chapter 3 . 2/28
And on the brand new sheets! HEATHEN!
| Angellovee chapter 1 . 2/28
Good start. Rushing to next chapter :)
| blueeyedcherry chapter 3 . 2/28
Drinking too much will eventually turn her. Or kill her. I guess it depends on who is there to intervene or what his intentions morph into.
There's a soft side buried somewhere down under that hard shell he's got up. I hope it comes out more as the story goes. Although it's nice to see a Vampward who isn't trying to be Prince Charming. ;)
Poor Bella. I can't imagine being in her situation. I'd be terrified. Even though Esme and Alice are friendly ... It's pretty much nothing but a tiny thread keeping her alive at this point. And to be in the middle of nowhere like that makes it even worse.
Loving this so far. I haven't read a lot of vamp fics, but this one is going on the faves list. :)
| blueeyedcherry chapter 2 . 2/28
So he's keeping her there? He values the silence that much? Very interesting.
I wonder whether she'll try to get away? This Edward is so cold and bitter, I can't imagine it being a pleasant experience for her. But of course we all know people can change. Perhaps her presence will soften him up a bit?
| blueeyedcherry chapter 1 . 2/26
Will someone change her? Save her? And how is it that Edward can experience complete silence in her presence? Hmmm...
Perhaps I'll get some answers in the next chapter. ;)
| CandyCentric chapter 16 . 2/26
Omg what the dickens just happened!? love the story, can't wait to read the sequel!
| Edmazing chapter 16 . 2/25
SHUT UP! She decalitated him? And he didn't even try to defend himself? I'm shocked. Shocked, I tell you. Whoa. Great job on writing your own rules.
| Edmazing chapter 15 . 2/24
Omg. It's hard to feel sorry for him and his anguish right now when he's changing her against her will, yet I still do. His feelings have grown so quickly for her and I think he still doesn't know the half of it. Btw, I love that you let him cry. I've always hated those tearless crying scenes lol.
| Edmazing chapter 14 . 2/24
I love how dependent he's becoming with her. It's not exactly affectionate is it... but it's something lol. And gah I feel like I'd they had just a little big more time- maybe a little less pressure- she could begin to reciprocate.
| R4Ever chapter 16 . 2/24
EXCELLENT STORY EXCELLENT WRITING WOW JUST WOW!
| Edmazing chapter 13 . 2/24
Ugh, I know my reading and reviewing is sketchy at best, but know that I'm still here and invested in these two. I'm so trained to expect an HEA and I just don't think that's gonna happen here. Especially when I think about the sequel, lol. What are you doing & why do I love it? Haha