|Reviews for Here in the Garden of Sin|
| Justmecp chapter 4 . 12/11/2010
Another great chapter!
| Justmecp chapter 3 . 12/11/2010
| TLammy chapter 7 . 12/11/2010
Ah so that makes sense, he didn't give her enough venom so it just healed her. Carlisle attitude was a little surprising "with my family" as in not you Edward? So I'm caught up now and at your mercy for updates...no rush, I love your story so I'm sure no matter how long it takes I'll drop everything else and read.
| Justmecp chapter 2 . 12/11/2010
| TLammy chapter 6 . 12/11/2010
Wow, so he finally does it and nothing really happens? She heals instead of changing? Guess Edward's not the only weird one in the bunch...moving on to the last published chapter. I just know I'll end up with more questions than answers but it's okay...I like mysteries ;)
| TLammy chapter 5 . 12/11/2010
I can't help but wonder if he heard the snippets of his family because he stopped concentrating on her or if she made a conscious effort to "let him" hear. I also can't help but wonder if Esme is really going to support him in changing her. Can't wait to learn more. Good chapter!
| TLammy chapter 4 . 12/11/2010
Oh, so he does plan on changing her and keeping her so the voices in his head are gone. He's really screwed up if he expects her to want to stay with him... I'm really enjoying your storytelling. Moving on to the next chapter.
| TLammy chapter 3 . 12/11/2010
Just keeps getting better. I can't believe he drank again. I'm trying to figure him out...does he want to keep her human or change her? Good chapter!
| Twink423 chapter 7 . 12/11/2010
so great, girlie!
I loved the talking the the shower about her blushing, etc. seems edward is trying to be nicer to her. Wonder if Bella will ever see him as less than a monster.
Can't wait for more!
| Twink423 chapter 6 . 12/11/2010
WTF? You are so evil! ;-)
But still I love it! So his venom healed her, but not changed her? Interesting twist babe.
Can't wait to see what is next! I'm so hooked! :D
| Twink423 chapter 5 . 12/11/2010
Kill Bella? No way! Better let Edward change her soon or he'll be very pissed at his family. I'm glad esme was able to talk to him a bit and be understanding. He needs someone on his side. And Bella seems almost resolved to die now, how would she get away if she could? Would he find her? I'm certain he would and wouldn't give up till he did.
Love all the drama! And like that if Edward stops concentrating on Bella, he can hear snipets of his families thoughts.
| Twink423 chapter 4 . 12/11/2010
Oh man! I love Bella standing up to him earlier in the chapter. And now we know that Edward really wants to keep her as his forever. Will she ever let him or have no choices at all? He's making the choice for her to be selfish, etc. How more powerful would Bella become as a vamp? Can't wait to find out how it all goes down!
| bluetwilightheart chapter 7 . 12/11/2010
Great chapter as always but I think dat da more ma questions are answered da more questions arise! But at least they're on much more friendly terms:) update ASAP cauze I cannot get enough of diz story! Hurry plz!
| Twink423 chapter 3 . 12/11/2010
Omg! What another great cliffie! So he lost control again and seems to be ashamed maybe that he did that again or what? Hmmmm. Very good stuff!
| TLammy chapter 2 . 12/11/2010
I love possessive Edwards. I'm dying to know if it's Bella's shield that is blocking his ability...did he set something off when he was trying to read her, a defense mechanism? Moving on to the next chapter.