Reviews for Paradise
Team66fan chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
Very sweet story!
mrskebab chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
Very good no clitwitching this time lmao x your so clever x
Color me Red chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Omg I loved this.
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
So Em and Bella huh? This is very interesting! D Im excited to read! So lets get to it! D Gahh, Nooo. Why did it end? I did not expect it to end right there! Thats horrible.. but i guess as the saying goes, And the rest is history! Lol! Anyways you should just add onto this about how they grew up more! LOl! And finally met again! Blah blah, right? Haha, Anywhoo i loved this one shot so much! It truly did surprise me and all with the couple being un-cannon! But i loved it non the less! D It was a wonderful and incredible one shot! D I cant wait for more of anything you do! ;D

~Ashley~
DICATAKADD chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
I was reading it on my Blackberry over the weekend while out of town. Ah...I wanted to jump in and review so badly...I loved this...I was actually at my Mom's in Nashville getting ready to move her down here with us (in GA). I couldn't help to laugh my ass off as you mentioned Nashville...God, so many people come there "to make it big" like Renee and then the two of them moving to Gatlinburg...ha, I just giggled imaging that(been there done that...never to Dollywood). You are WONDERFULLY creative!

The story was super sweet with Emmett and Bella, shame on her mom for choosing herself over her child! I loved the end...very cool ending for both of them even without each other.

P.S. before even reading this one-shot I was listening to Lighting 100 (in Nashville) and BEAUTIFUL MESS came on...I thought about you right away!
Sunflowerfields chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Great O/S. It's hard enough being a teenager trying to make your way through what life throughs at you and navigate new things like relationships, love, friends and school but, to have a parent like Renee dragging you all over the place would make it that much harder if you didn't have roots. I thought it was a nice change of pace to have Emmett and Bella paired up with each other and the fact that they were each other's first was great. However, in the end I like that they wound up with Edward and Rosalie.
Hope4more chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
You really know how to make me hate Renee. Wait, I already do so it didn't take much convincing. Guess B/Em werent meant to be. Funny how that works out. Lol
ColourmeCullen chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
I really loved this. Living in Nashville, it was kinda odd to see it in a fic like this, but you did good. lol oh, and as much as I like reading a little Bella/Emmett, it was cute how this ended.. the whole watching Emmett on the field thing though, that took me back to the same thing I did.. but it was baseball.. lol
Kerry Hale chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
So sad but so sweet. I loved it.
keyecullen chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Awwww...that is just so sad for Emmett and Bella. Not meant to be. But still sad. I enjoyed reading it.

Keye
FFFan1664 chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Really enjoyed this story - thanks!
DreamAngel9686 chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
loved every word!

need more please!
Paco1230 chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Really enjoyed this! Especially since Bella and Edward found each other at the end! :)
EverlyYours chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
I absolutely love this story! I love Emmett and I'm glad that Bella loved him too.
biblepam chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
cool little story.. bit of a different twist for sure.. moving around a lot, Bella was sort of like an army brat, always having to move around... thanks for it. Pam B.
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