|Reviews for Paradise|
| Ivygirl702 chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Ummm. Reading Emmett and Bella was odd. But I love how you end it with their each going on a date with Rosalie and Edward.
I love your take on Renee. I imagine that's how she would have really been.
Thanks for taking the time to write for FGB. Thanks to the person who bought you and let you share. :)
| MissRe chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
I think you did a great job with it! ChiTwiGal gave you an interesting challenge. I loved seeing the relationship with renee and I like how the relationship with Em evolved. It was a great first love experience and you like to think they will be in touch and friends for the rest of their lives as they move on with the people they are meant to be with. Awesome job!
| GeorgiaRee chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
I really liked that... was so mad at Renee and felt so bad for Bella. Em was a sweetie of course... but atleast she still got edwain the end. I could so see this picking back up in college. Wink wink.
| jenpall chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
So good. I was very curious when you said this was non-canon. I wish there was more. :)
| hnwhitlock2000 chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
We'll just have to see how they do it!
| misskaterinab chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Gotta love non-canon that still somehow manages to work out to be canon anyway - love it, very sweet :)