Reviews for Getting Over Fifi
Catholic Critic chapter 6 . 9/23/2015
I liked the story so far, but what kept me from liking it more was the terrible spelling and grammer, the villian was so generic and would've been better if he was replaced with Jack Rabbit. I found good things in this fic but I kept seeing one bad thing after another. I hope you do make a sequel to this story and improve your writing. So with all of that, I wish you luck good sir.
Guest chapter 6 . 2/20/2015
When Dudley, Kitty, and the T.U.F.F agents became old and passed on, The God forces Malice to apologize to all the agents including Dudley and Kitty for all the terrible things he done in the past and he confessed the he saw Dudley and Kitty were dating. He was being jealous and stupid. The agents even Dudley and Kitty accepted his apology and forgives him. The God tells him he's reprieved but he will not see them again anymore. Malice understand the whole thing and he is banished from heaven and sent to perdition in his eternity and his memories are replaced.
dudleyfollower25 chapter 6 . 1/5/2014
great job
KittyLover 1 chapter 6 . 12/19/2013
fucking awesome !
Sailor Saturn chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
I feel so sorry for the bed they tortured it
Poor bed R.I.P. :(
But I still love it :)
Guest chapter 2 . 7/29/2013
Wow a fucking 11 year old writing smut
tyivonnorton24 chapter 6 . 5/30/2013
yes do it
Suicide is golden chapter 6 . 5/15/2013
This story sucks-KIDDING!
If Kitty does get pregnant how will that affect her agent life? Will Dudley get more mature?
Suicide is golden chapter 4 . 5/15/2013
Suicide is golden chapter 3 . 5/15/2013
sequel! sequel! sequel!
Guest chapter 5 . 4/19/2013
Ah I thought Dudley was going to bit the sh** out of him
Guest chapter 3 . 4/19/2013
Guest chapter 2 . 4/19/2013
Yo dafug
TheBigGuyTB1 chapter 6 . 3/22/2013
Holy S**t. They fu**ed in the freakin' bed.
Just Defender chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Would you mind running a spell/grammar check on this?
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