Reviews for Inevitable
arses21 chapter 12 . 11/24/2014
Wow, this was just hot, sweet wonderful fluff & i absolutely loved it! Thanks!
d-kronk chapter 12 . 1/20/2014
Great job! I really enjoyed this fic. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
d-kronk chapter 11 . 1/20/2014
I'm glad they are still going strong a year later. And it sucks that they were separated on their anniversary. Hopefully Penelope will finish with her paperwork soon and can get home to Derek.
d-kronk chapter 10 . 1/20/2014
I am really liking this side of them and you are doing a great job with this. I love their date and Penelope's reaction when Derek asks her. I'm glad he isn't crazy and he stayed.
d-kronk chapter 9 . 1/20/2014
I really do like how easy it has been for them to cross the line from friends to lovers. Hopefully when Penelope talks to JJ she will feel less uneasy about everything. Their domestic bliss is great, wonderful job.
d-kronk chapter 8 . 1/20/2014
I really like Derek's thoughts when he comes home to Penelope wearing one of his shirts. I love them being so happy together, hopefully they stay that way.
d-kronk chapter 7 . 1/20/2014
Great chapter. I really like their after sex talk. Derek getting her to say what was happening earlier and then just his simple words were perfect. I'm glad they were both where they want to be. And I love him telling her to just stay at his house during the day and relax.
d-kronk chapter 6 . 1/19/2014
I'm really glad that she thought about what happened and went over to Derek's. I also enjoyed their phone call, that was fun. I'm glad that Penelope wanted to apologize for what happened earlier and her wanting to be sure that they were alright.
d-kronk chapter 5 . 1/19/2014
I like that their morning after...not awkward at all for the two of them. And their teasing while getting ready for work is great. And then...the angst. I'm feeling for Derek in this, his confusion is great. Hopefully she talks to him soon and tells him what's going on.
d-kronk chapter 4 . 1/19/2014
I really like that even though the urgency is here it's also sweet and touching. Wonderful job with this.
d-kronk chapter 3 . 1/19/2014
I really like the urgency through this. Both of their thoughts are also great. I'm really glad that neither of them are backing down. And I like that it's Penelope being the voice of reason, knowing when to stop before they go to far at their current location.
d-kronk chapter 2 . 1/19/2014
Great chapter. I really like that Penelope can easily read Derek's thoughts as he's staring at her on the plane. I love her telling him not here, pulling him close to tell him was great and then picking a place five minutes away, love it and them not being able to wait to get to either of their homes.
d-kronk chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Great start. I really like how the kiss happened... and then along comes Rossi. I really like his reaction and Derek's glare. And I'm sure they would have put those five more minutes to a lot of use.
Zoe chapter 12 . 5/17/2013
This story was so sweet, and really well written. You've got their personalities down to a tee, and the banter is so believable, it's like watching the show. Brilliant fic, amazing work :D
Nimue68 chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
I miss your stories
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