|Reviews for Without You|
| Barranca chapter 8 . 5/8/2011
Great premise, Sam finally has learned his lesson. You conveyed his hopelessness and anguish masterfully, leaving him with a way out. I guess it once again shows that if we want to change the world, we need to start from ourselves.
| Likaella chapter 8 . 4/4/2011
Thanks you so much for written this story, for goes so deep in the understanding of what sam had become, of what Dean deserves. There are not many fic like yours, it's a beautiful work. Thanks again.
| hey chapter 8 . 11/9/2010
Loved this story, the end did feel a bit rushed but I loved the idea about the first vessel being the first alpha, etc. Also I would love a story with evil!Dean, I'm tired of him being a doormat too. That would be very therapeutic. Looking forward to whatever you may write next.
| angeleyenc chapter 8 . 11/9/2010
I loved it! can't wait for the sequel!
| emmau chapter 8 . 11/9/2010
Well, don't I feel sheepish today? Maybe you could take it as a compliment to some very effective writing-I was afraid that the last chapter was really the end of Sam and Dean, at least on the earthly plane. I was thrilled to see that I was wrong.
I have to admit, not much makes me feel sympathetic towards Sam these days, but the thought of him chained up and used as a monster battery while lost in djinn dreams was horrifying. I loved the idea that the alphas are legion-one is mowed down, and another takes his place. They were so creepily reverant of Sam, and I felt for him.
Stupid alphas-doesn't the universe, heaven, hell, everything in between know by now that Dean will *always* come for Sam? I loved him charging in with a scythe, the ring of Solomon and a plan. I love Cas and his lack of sharpie, and I loved that they've blew the supernatural right out of Sam. I think that Sam has to deal with himself knowing that he's 100% Sam. What happens from now on is not a matter of destiny-he's truly just another hunter.
The conversation between Sam and Dean at the end was fantastic. I loved Sam's confession, and Dean's quiet acceptance of the apology. Of course Sam is strugglinging under the weight of his actions, but Dean refused to let him wallow ("Self-pity doesn't become you" and "It's not an excuse not to try"-those lines were wonderful. Sam does tend to get lost in his own feelings about things, and right there he was in danger of slipping again). I'm glad that there's no quick fix, but an offer of help and a chance to change. This is a great, optimistic ending. Thanks for the ride. I loved it.
| phyllisstevens chapter 8 . 11/9/2010
very good story and great imagination i enjoyed it very much
| babyreaper chapter 8 . 11/9/2010
Firstly I loved this story and I loved the final chapter, glad that they mamaged to patch up their broken relationship a little. Enough to at least try to get back the brotherly bond they had. I haven't seen any of the new season but have been sneaking peeks on youtube, so I know what's kinda happening with them and the Campbells. The worst thing I've seen todate is the look on Sam's face when he stands and watches Dean get turned into a Vampire. That smirk just said it all. A sequel to your story would be great, just to see how they are getting on. Are they managing to forgive and forget? Not really liking Dean going all evil, what can I say I'm a Dean fan. But if you write something I will certainly give it a go. Thanks to posting this I really enjoyed it.
| LeeLee chapter 8 . 11/9/2010
LOVED IT and yes Dean needs to quit being a doormat I mean really, but it looks like Dean may get some backbone next episode maybe kick Crowley's ass perhaps...
| BranchSuper chapter 7 . 11/4/2010
What the hell? You can't leave it there...
| jane chapter 7 . 11/3/2010
This was a great ending. After my last review I had to come back. I just thought this would be another "I hate Sam" story but I was never so wrong and glad to admitt it. This chapter was well balanced and great written.
I also would like to read the Twist and I agree that there had been enough resurrections.
Sorry still not registered, I should see to that. And its ok if you dont answer me. I just felt I wronged you last time and had to set it right.
| Star Mage1 chapter 7 . 11/3/2010
I like where Sam is now at and all I'm interested in seeing is how Dean deals with Sam's death.
| cold kagome chapter 7 . 11/3/2010
OMG... POOR SAMMY... AWWWWE.. IM ALMOST CRY...LOVE IT
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE..
| tori kennedy chapter 7 . 11/3/2010
sequel loved the story but dean needs to know that Sam is ok
| emrldgrn2010 chapter 7 . 11/2/2010
ok since this is the first time reading it and reveiwing let me first say YOU ARE BRILLIANT
I loved it and it made me cry... I have to say I am hoping for some sort of twist.. Like maybe Sam didn't get out maybe everything that happened is a dream or a delusion so everything he's experianced is fake but life altering.. The solitary confinement and having his blood drained from him for some type of medicine could do that (and its not all that unbeleviable) So Dean comes and saves him and hears part if his little tyrade making him delusional. Then you could have him talk to Sam get through to him then Sam shoots up and theirs Dean and he breaks down...
Personally I really hope you do both endings because either or would be great.. But I agree bringing Sam back is to Cliche (BUT YOU COULD DEFINATELY DO THE DELUSIONS DREAMS WHAT SAM THINKS IS REALLITY) And you could make it symbolic to like through these dreams and delusions the cold and angry Sam dies and Dean is there to witness it and BAM THEIR BROTHERS AGAIN LOL...
As for the other one Sam could be in heaven but with the future Dean a Dean who has lived a full life and died... and they are brothers again with their loved ones.. SO I SAY GO FOR BOTH PLEASE...
| LadyAislynnWolfe2015 chapter 7 . 11/2/2010
I would say the twist part... Maybe instead of having Sam dead he's in a coma? or he's not really dead instead he had a vision and baled out of the hunt? I don't know because you wrote a fic With you basically saying that he and Dean would be reunited... Or you could have Dean die leaving Lisa a widow? I don't know...