|Reviews for Beach Interlude Part II: Secret Alliance|
| Sadie321 chapter 3 . 1/6
There isn't enough Itahina stories so please update soon .
| kandita chapter 3 . 12/3/2013
lol " my creepy brother"...Sasuke is funny. I am just curious as to how Itachi is going to pull it off with the Akatsuki? And, how is Tsunade going to handle the 3 bastard advisors. It's bad enough they don't really approve of her n her methods. I dislike Sajura very much with a passion, however I am happy that she's in a more mellow light here. And, I'm happy that her love is not onesided. I am a bit curious about the bros meeting n Sasuke learning the truth as well as learning his Nana is alive n well.
Also I have such tremendous respect for Itachi. To kill his own clan and to save his brother and grandmother. I mean he had to have carry such a load on his shoulders. And, then to be a spie for Konoha after all that men. I have really hope Danzo n the other 2 get what they deserve.
Pls update soon
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/1/2013
PO FAVOR CONTINUALO ES UN BUEN FIC TANTO ESTE COMO LA PRIMERA PARTE CONTI CONTI CONTI
| Gaara's-Hina-Chan chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Hi! Its me :) please update! ł really wanna know what happens next! ł love this story its pure awesomeness §o pleaseeeee update! :)
| Gaara's-Hina-Chan chapter 3 . 9/27/2013
Wow! ł seriously loved your story! ł really hope you update asap! ł hate Sakura ℓøℓ §o ł wasn't happy she and Hinata were friends (part 1 n still now) but if ł were in your position ł would have been left Ńo choice but to do as you did to fit with the plot ℓøℓ you really are a truly amazing author ł really love this
ł was shocked though that Sasuke and Sakura...hehe but anyway update soon plzzzzzzzzzz I'm really loving this! Can't wait for next chappie! :D
| aurora0914 chapter 2 . 9/1/2013
Im sorry; I loved part one, but I wont be able to finish part two; Im a vicious SasuSaku hater. :) Sorry. I believe that Sasuke is a loner, or with Hinata, or whatever. It was all really good; but I stopped reading when Sakura and Sasuke kissed. In reality, Sasuke tried to kill Sakura.
| Seraphina Dragon chapter 3 . 7/23/2013
please keep updating
| H.R chapter 3 . 6/15/2013
Awesome as usual, can't wait for the next :-)
| Kay Gryffin chapter 3 . 5/23/2013
When I saw your most recent update after your hiatus, I will not lie:
I screamed like a little girl.
Lol. I like this story a lot, and I'm glad you're back. I'm curious as to where this is going, and I hope you'll update it soon! :)
| Luna Marry chapter 3 . 5/11/2013
A very good chapter!
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/10/2013
Don't be afraid to use contractions, especially in speech.
Example: "I love champagne; I have had it..." - "I love champagne; I've had it...". Ask yourself what you yourself would say.
While I agree that some characters would use stilted speech no matter the occassion, and Hinata and Itachi were raised in a formal milieu, they are not, however, beyond "letting their hair down" in an relaxed environment, such as a restaurant.
Looking forward to the next update and hope I haven't bugged you too much :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/10/2013
Ew, SasuSaku, why did you do that? Why give her what she wants? And Sakura, what a traitor you really are. Well, if it's for the good of the plot then so be it.
Yes Shika, you're the only sane one (apart from our resident Romeo and Juliet).
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
I think you made them two years older, as Hinata (part II-version) is 16 in the manga, and Itachi died at 21. Hinata is also born in December, making her one of the, if not the, youngest of the mains.
Otherwise, good job!
| KagomeMarie chapter 3 . 5/5/2013
Cute Itachi has a stalker
| Zelga Lim Li chapter 3 . 5/3/2013
finally i was about to pm you ever since i saw your update on your other story... ehehehe:)