Reviews for Ordinary World
DragonThetan chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
Beautiful story!
LinBates chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Wonderful story! We were told so little of Balinor, both his life before Hunith and afterwards.

Happy writing until next we meet!
Sahba chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Aww how sweet
Nance chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Aww. A mother's love is so beautiful.
LunaLupin12 chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Oh, this was so absolutely sweet! Wonderful!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Absolutely lovely. Beautiful writing.
MERLINLOVER365 chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
awk so sweet!
sesshouluver chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
awwwwwwwwww cute!
Emachinescat chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Aw, that was so sweet and sad! Bravo! :D
Mel1592 chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
This is nice, I've been searching for a story like this.

One little comment, Hunith talks about not knowing Gaius until she came to Camelot, but Richard Wilson said he was supposed to be Hunith's brother. I wish they'd just come out with it onscreen already, 'cause it's confusing lol

*also puts in a continuation request*
CM chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Great story! I really enjoyed reading it! But the ending is quite abrupt especially for a one shot.

So, this is pretty much a request for continuation! :-D
FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
*cry* I still don't know WHY they had to kill off Balinor...they SHOULD bring him back somehow...

Anyway, great one-shot! :)
Yukka Sam chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
I completely loved it. It was just so credible to see Merlin in such a state after the ending of S2, and that he went to talk to his mother made it even better. It was really IC and beautiful.

"Merlin, he didn't disappoint. You are the most beautiful thing in my world." Im in love with that line. Period.

Bye and thank you!)