Reviews for The Currency We Trade In
tomxdougluver14 chapter 5 . 9/15/2013
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crokettsgirl chapter 6 . 11/24/2010
I liked the flashbacks to show how Tom was starting to feel about Judy back then . Then jump to present to show he still feels this way even though he tried not to and dated. Taking to Hoffs he didn't get to far, poor Tommy. Love the flash back with Ioki and Penhall...and the date can't wait to see that one...sue

I keep hitting alert for this and two other stories and this isn't working for some odd reason. So that is why I just got around to these two chapters.
crokettsgirl chapter 5 . 11/24/2010
Wow, he has such doubts about Jackie but she was nothing serious anyway. Now he is realizing how Judy makes him feel which is good Jackie will be out of there I am wondering if this isn't a dream and it was remembering when they were together where he could kiss her like that? Guess I will have to wait. Great job I enjoyed the chapter. Sue
Bunny1 chapter 6 . 11/23/2010
LOL, love it!
Cerisa chapter 5 . 11/22/2010
Wait, are you saying that they had a past relationship or is he still just dreaming? Great chapter!
Bunny1 chapter 5 . 11/21/2010
Dragon77 chapter 5 . 11/21/2010
I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.
crokettsgirl chapter 4 . 11/20/2010
Great chapter very good. I love how Tom starts on Jackie about the mexican example she gave him that time on how she got her how Judy and Tom locked eyes. Oh boy Marcus has another woman's phone number and had grab that really enjoyed this and the whole chapter was in the right tense making even better for me to read. I'm so enjoying this and I can't wait to see what you have planned. Sue
immabehappy chapter 4 . 11/20/2010
I see hoes in Marcus' future...Uh..huh...I saw that phone number. He has a nice body, but that's about it. Nice work...Keep it up!
Cerisa chapter 4 . 11/17/2010
Haha, the part with Jackie and Tommy bickering was really funny, I could see them fighting over her trying to eat off of Hanson's plate. Like the long glances Judy was giving Tommy. This is turning out to be a wonderful story. Can't wait for the next update!
Bunny1 chapter 4 . 11/17/2010
Interesting... I like it so far. Hated both Jackie AND Marcus, and I'm totally a Hansen/Hoffs fan;)
immabehappy chapter 3 . 11/14/2010
Cutness! I never liked Marcus either. He's a jerk, but most importantly...he's a jerk. lol He isn't one here...yet. But, he'll make a good antagonist, just like Jackie does. I'm glad you are pursuing the story. You're doing a good job! I will tell you that Sal's wife's name is Rose...Keep it up!
crokettsgirl chapter 3 . 11/12/2010
You're doing a great job with this. I hope Ioki, Penhall and Fuller are in it too. Love how Tom and Judy are just starting to realize the feelings they've pushed down and that are now coming back up. Jackie is I never liked Marcus. Love how Tom left Marcus hanging that is so Tom. lol...One thing I have to say only to help and not to put down believe me. You might want to watch your tenses, I read some stories that bounce between the tenses and I have to stop reading them or put in my mind the right tense. Like the word Has instead of using Had. Mostly you are in the right tense just a few places which is better than a few I've seen and please don't be mad or upset with this just something to help. I've written for other fandoms and have had the same things and other things told to me to make the story better for the reader. I like this story and I hope you finish it, keep it going. I just adore Judy and Tom together and I love Hanson's sarcastic way about
Dragon77 chapter 3 . 11/11/2010
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
Cerisa chapter 3 . 11/10/2010
This was really great! I like how you are building the tension between Tom and Judy plus the hint of jealousy and annoyance Tom is having with Marcus. You have the characters down well especially the Banducci family (LOL!) I love the way you wrote everything out with enough detail, it is like I'm watching it on TV. Great work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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