Reviews for A true friend
ilhdc7 chapter 3 . 3/28
I like it, very interesting. It would be a LOT easier to read if you spaced out the talking, each person talking had their own line, if that makes sense, it goes like this:

Instead of: "Hey" "Hey" "Whats up" "Nothin' much"- That's hard to read

Go like this:

"Hey"
"Hey"
"Whats up"
"Nothin' much"

It makes a little more sense. But I liked your plot.
KaninAlliee chapter 3 . 10/31/2013
what about cricket
Ashleigh chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Quite romantic! I love the drama! You should keep on writing this story!
Exmoorpony chapter 3 . 12/24/2010
I'll tell you something. The only thing about this story that officially stunk was that it ended. Please write another chapter! Or another story about them! I can tell you're an awesome writer. I'll be watching for another Wild Horse Island story by you, that's for sure! :D
AceTrace chapter 3 . 11/29/2010
Loved it! So much that im grinning like an idiot! Lol
Wild Cowgirl 16 chapter 3 . 11/17/2010
Sweet chapter!
fan chapter 2 . 10/26/2010
1 word love keep going so kewl u should maybe put cade has to rescue darby from something
fan chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
dude awesome keep going might want to space the paragraphs a bit diferent kinds hard to read but still good
The Narnian Phantom Stallion chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
this was good but i was a little confused sometimes because the paragraghs aren't spaced.
is there another chapter to this?