Reviews for Uchiha Obito, Ghost!
InARealPickle chapter 12 . 1/22/2011
Kakashi covered up his eye. Thank you, Obito.

Obito sneezed.

LoL

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Hilarious! Obito and Naruto's antics never fail to crack me up. Makes me wish he was really alive. HaHa, and Kakashi totallly called Naruto out.
ferret assassin nin chapter 4 . 1/22/2011
I love this story so far! It's great! This is how I would want the actual series to go! Of course, then it wouldn't be called fanfiction, now would it? lol anyway! Your writing style is pretty cool too. It's simiple and to the point, really. I love naruto's change of clothes! He seriously has a great sense style. Or, as it might be, you have a great sense of style. lol

ferret nin

ps: can't wait til i read more! *giant happy face*
midnight98 chapter 12 . 1/22/2011
Naruto got found out. I can't wait for more!
SonicStories101 chapter 12 . 1/22/2011
you're sooo good at updating! i love this story to pieces!
Mel72000 chapter 12 . 1/22/2011
Thank you for your chapter, I love it !
mfmxxx chapter 12 . 1/22/2011
Awesome.

Naruto keeping on turning to a blank area for a few seconds is bound to get some notice.

Sakura looked at Kakashi in confusion. "Naruto's had these goggles since he was ten."

I'm suprised he didn't go hyper that she noticed. :P
SonicStories101 chapter 11 . 1/21/2011
i've been so busy reading i haven't reviewed. this is the coolest story ever! :D
Kenta Raikiri chapter 11 . 1/19/2011
Kenta: (shrugs casually) Sure.

Cool, I'm on a Naruto-high right now, so I'm reading just about ANY story that has to do with Naruto...even though I have to study for my SAT...

I'm going to get Naruto level grades in Math...(cries pathetically)

Anyway, Kakashi's getting suspicious and Naruto and Sasuke are gonna fight Zabuza. I don't think you're going to do the shadow-shuriken technique...or are you? With some revisions since Naruto can use Winde-style jutsu? It'd be pretty cool.

I can see it now:

Zabuza disappeared in a blur of motion, a powerful kick sending Sasuke flying backwards.

"Sasuke!" Naruto shouted after the Uchiha.

"Naruto! DUCK!" Obito shouted.

Naruto ducked, not even looking as Zabuza swung his sword across where Naruto's head used to be. The blonde jumped back before making a cross-shaped hand-sign.

"Shadow Clone Jutsu!" Doubles of Naruto appeared across the ground, surrounding Zabuza, each pulling out a kunai.

"Hmmm...Shadow clones eh? Not bad." The Naruto's charged at him, kunai flashing, but were blasted backwards by Zabuza's large sword. "But not good enough."

Naruto created more doppelgangers, Sasuke jumping up into the air and tossing a demon-shuriken towards the real Zabuza.

"At least you had the sense to try and attack the real me." The clone said non-chalantly.

That's all I'm gonna write, but I still think it would be cool if Naruto used his Wind Chakra to kinda give the Demon-shuriken (and Naruto, who had transformed into the shadowshuriken after the second round of clones) a speed boost, catching Zabuza off-gaurd. Still, I'd like to see how you free Kakashi and have Haku enter. It will be...most interesting...

Kenta Raikiri
Carbuncle chapter 11 . 1/18/2011
WOW! This story is amazing, like, it is SOOOOOO good!

I love the plot, the characters, the OBITO, and how amazing this story is!

(You should totally have Obito like, force his will onto others like that one guy in the movie similar to this story did- you know, with those pilots in it that put out forest fires?)

Anyways, loved the story, keep it coming cuz I'll die if you don't (:p) and...yeah. Can't wait to read more!
OBSERVER01 chapter 11 . 1/17/2011
so far so it up
midnight98 chapter 11 . 1/17/2011
Update soon!
ican'tbebotheredtologinD chapter 11 . 1/17/2011
love love love it!

It sounds a bit werid, but your story really makes my day awesome. I did all my homework and when i checked my inbox, there was the alert saying new chapter; like a reward. :D ...yup, that sounded werid...

Anywayyyyy, great chapter, though i think kakashi should be more suspicious of naruto and naruto's talking 'to himself'. and maybe include more of naruto getting or almost getting caught talking to himself. though, of course, these are just my ideas, and i won't stop reading this is you decide my suggests suck. :) it's all good.

btw, sorry if my review is super odd, i'm in a super odd mood. :D
mfmxxx chapter 11 . 1/17/2011
I always loved the

"Hn. Teamwork, from you?" Sasuke scoffed. "But I suppose I'll listen."

line from Sasuke then, it made me think he was Kai from Beyblade which I used to watch as a kid.

Nice chapter.
LordPancho chapter 11 . 1/17/2011
I've really enjoyed your story so far, and can't wait to read more. You have excellent pacing and story-progression, a skill many authors seem to lack. Keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 11 . 1/16/2011
i love it please hurry with the next chapters
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