Reviews for Uchiha Obito, Ghost!
dojomojo chapter 1 . 6/6/2016
This is gonna be fun
angelgreene220 chapter 32 . 5/26/2016
The difference between NaruSasu and SasuNaru:

In NaruSasu Naruto acts like a macho man guy and Sasuke acts like a girl, wanting to talk about feels and being sensitive.

In SasuNaru Sasuke acts like a macho man guy and Naruto acts like a girl, wanting to talk about feels and being sensitive.

Just kidding ;P If you don't get the joke check out dogbertcarroll's story Fragments Chapter 17 in which Sasuke "breaks the code1" and proves yaoi is "just a thinly veiled version of true art!2"
First quote from Sasuke, second quote is the narrative/thoughts of Kakashi.

Your story is cool and I can't wait to see what happens.
cabbieforhire chapter 56 . 5/4/2016
If there's one thing I have to say about this story it's that you *say* Naruto has trained his ass off and learned all sorts of things and is no longer a brash idiot and then... you make him too stupid to use any of these supposed things he's learned or too weak to use them properly. It's weird. I thought this story was about Obito helping Naruto reach his potential, not Naruto getting a few basic lessons in the beginning and then just have everyone else get even better than him even though there's no reason for them to be stronger and have Naruto act like idiot for 'humor'. I swear it's like you put more into Sakura's transformation than Naruto's. (By the by, the whole 'Sakura punches Naruto on the head because she's annoyed' thing got old real fast. When they first started out it was fine, but by now she should be mature enough not hit a friend just because. It's not funny, it's pointless.)

I also agree with the reviewer(s) who complain about the Kyuubi chakra. Either let Naruto use it or don't even bring it up. He doesn't even get affected by the Kyuubi the way you think he does. It seems more like a way to make Sasuke/Obito/Kakashi to look calm and mature when they just look like interfering jackasses.

Also, and this one is small and from several chapters back, but when Naruto first learned the Kage Bunshin and found out about the memory transfer he immediately thought of using it to train with. A few chapters later, you made Obito think of it in yet another attempt to make Naruto look like an idiot.

Huh. Guess there was more than on thing.
BlackLady11 chapter 70 . 3/8/2016
I like how you create team 7 and Obito characters. Story has a good plot, but I don't like the good shinobi like Asuma ( He is wise, so he would not hint anything about Naruto posible status in front of genin) or Hiruzen ( He cares about Naruto, so he would not ignor his fight to read Icha Icha) stupid and I seriously despise Gaara in your story. He isn't Sasuke so don't make him be like emo-Uchiha. Gaara has comlicated childhood, but he would never start self-pitying. He was cool character because even if he was similiar to Sasuke he never comlain about his past. Canon Sasuke was all about his hard life and his revange.
I like your story, but for the most part I dont like character you create. It is someting you should work on. My favourite characters in this story: Iruka - spot on. Naruto and Obito the same. Gai and Lee - they always made me smile.
trynmailme chapter 69 . 3/4/2016
It was grttt thanx
E chapter 55 . 2/21/2016
Kakashi was a former ANBU captain, a genius, former student of a genius who went on to become a very powerful kage, has been a ninja since he was just a kid (5 or was it 7?), and fought in a war, the amount of experience he has is overwhelming!

But you mean to tell me that someone who yes is a 'genius' and has a very powerful bloodline, BUT he has less experience, could easily fool Kakashi!? Really? Just Really?

Yes they are both recovering from being drugged but STILL! I mean come ON!

Just No
Guest chapter 30 . 2/7/2016
The art of grunting lol
SilverXDestiny chapter 17 . 11/16/2015

Akane: You TRIED to pound your fists on the ground.
Obito: Don't rub it in, teme! I died... I thought you'd be nice!
Akane: I died too. So I'm stuck with you.
Obito: Again, teme, don't rub it in!
Akane: Well I saw Kakashi's face once!
Obito: Really? C'mon, tell me tell me tell me!
Akane: Tell you whaaaatt?
Obito: YOU KNOW!
Akane: He has a mole on his chin, and smooth skin...
Obito: I knew it! There is a mole!
Akane: And he has a scar on his left eye... it's a Magenkyou Sharingan... and he has a weird hairstyle.
Obito: ...Magenkyou? Hmm...
Akane: Basically, he looks like a stoic, rule obsessed teme version of Hatake Sakumo, from the bingo books. He hides his face so he doesn't get assassinsassinaated!
Obito: -stifles laugh- Assasssasssinated! Wait... how did you know this?
Akane: The manga. A book.
Obito: A man-what?
Akane: Ignore what I said, "Obi-kunnn!"
Obito: Darn it! I hate my mum and her stupid nicknames!
Akane: -smirks-
Silver595 chapter 4 . 10/16/2015
Assuming that this is Japanese, a black cat is GOOD luck.

This is a problem with the Manga and Anime as well.

Silver595 chapter 3 . 10/16/2015
Naruto's goggles look NOTHING like Obito's goggles.
Silver595 chapter 2 . 10/16/2015
Obito is already still alive as Tobi, in the Akatsuki. The reason Kakashi has the Mangekyo Sharingan is that Rin impaled herself on his Chidori. Therefore, Obito also has Mangekyo.

In this chapter, Goggles in spelled as Googles a LOT.

Happy to help!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2015
this is iteresting
Guest chapter 13 . 10/4/2015
Cool story
RykaRyquni17 chapter 9 . 9/12/2015
Not how the test was supposed to go...
But I can deal!
Anyways, not to be rude, but this book is bugging me quite a bit. Obito was the one who made Kyuubi attack the village, though he used the name Madara. And how will Tobi be in this? Along with Madara. Both are Obito. So...
Wait, does Obito have the scars on his face as a ghost or does he look normal? And does he have sharingan in his eyes? He died with sharingan activated.
RykaRyquni17 chapter 4 . 9/12/2015
Hahaha! "Wait did I just insult myself?" Obito, wow, aboslute fail there buddy!
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