Reviews for Why Her?
HappyAnt21 chapter 39 . 4/29/2014
I think Vietnam likes Hong Kong. Please PM me if the answer is correct. If it isn't then can you tell me who it is plz ?
AllieXx chapter 65 . 4/16/2014
I think it would be interesting if there were a France ending. :3
kirbygirl123 chapter 20 . 3/22/2014
Oh dang...wasn't expecting that to happen! Could you please make an ending for Egypt and Turkey? I would love to see what happens with them! :)
pheobe chapter 3 . 3/7/2014
it is korea i read this before :)
pheobe chapter 2 . 3/7/2014
all the cute guys r gay because they suck
pheobe chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
2nd time reading this story
pheobe chapter 65 . 3/7/2014
i like this story i kick mom off the computur to read it keep writing it it is good
meepp chapter 52 . 3/7/2014
Can you make a Canada x Vietnam ending plz? Also I am practically Vietnam
pheobe chapter 43 . 3/6/2014
revisit Egypt and Italy
pheobe chapter 38 . 3/5/2014
i think you should put her with America because he trys so hard but with no success
kirbygirl123 chapter 14 . 2/24/2014
I just discovered this story last night and I like it so far! Yes, Vietnam does seem like a Mary Sue, but the story IS about her after all. ;) Anyway...I like the flow of the story so far, but I think you should have introduced all of the nations who were going to stay at Vietnam's house in the first chapter because then it would be either to remember. It seems like you introduced some nations in the earlier chapters but then you never mention other nations until later, like Egypt. It's not necessarily a bad thing, it's just that it can get confusing because you're just inserting new characters throughout the story. And by the way, Romano and Spain aren't brothers. Romano IS a brother, just not Spain's brother. His little brother is named Feliciano, or Italy as they always call him. However, people do ship Spamano, which is probably why you assumed they were brothers. But other than that, everything's okay. :D
iUmbreon chapter 60 . 2/23/2014
I absolutely love this fanfiction! I spent the entire day reading it. If it's ok, would you be able to make an alternate ending with Egypt?
Critical Anon chapter 65 . 2/22/2014
Over the past week I've been chipping through the Hetalia communities for recommended fanfics. This one was certainly different, focusing on a character with vauge info, allowing the writer to elaborate on a character with no depth. I can see that you've put a great amount of effort and time for this (how do you people write so much). I enjoyed each 65 cliche but dramatic chapters. The only thing i was rather disappointed of was the lack of character development. With so many chapters to work with i felt as though the characters were one-dimentional, predictable, rather vulnrable, and rather controversial to their cannon forms. I do understand that you had a warning for OOC moments, however, much of it had been quite opisite of their cannon character. Within this fanfic, Vietnam was written with moments of weakness, vulnerableness, and having slightly over dramatic reactions and
behaviours, when she has cannonly been potrayed as a strong, quite, calm, and independant character. From a personal stand point, the characters hadnt been written at their highest quality, and Vietnam had become an awkward mary sue that everyone adored, admired, loved to bits, and followed all around the globe. Your fanfic is wonderful, and you put alitnof time and effort into it. Bravo! Keep striving to inovate and improve your writting and you'll get places :) Great job!
kumiko.hime.pinkie chapter 65 . 2/19/2014
Can you write an ending of Norway or Iceland?
I think they're good boys...
Your fic is, yeah, comedy and cute love it so much because I'm VNese. xD
Guest chapter 47 . 2/3/2014
yah viet-kun is kinda bishie
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