Reviews for Shadow's Son
Guest chapter 1 . 1/7
The story is ok but I don't like the fact that Shikamaru and Ino we're paired.
DUH BOMB chapter 1 . 1/9/2015
It's so sad and sweet! Shikaino for life
WindPretear chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
I wish this story was longer! I loved it but I would probably get someone to beta it. There are some grammatical errors but those can be fixed quickly. Any chance of a sequel? Any child of Ino and Shikamaru would be so adorable :D
narusaku143 chapter 1 . 10/15/2014
was nice.
Commander Link chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Giiiiirrrrlllll your grammar could use some work. I do believe that you need a beta or a copy of Microsoft Office. I can act as a beta, or you cand spend some money on some well rounded software. Either way, do what works best for you.
Clara chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
Really good story, it would be nice if you wrote another chapter.
B. Embella chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
SOBBING GROSSLY BECAUSE THIS WAS SO SO CUTE! The whole dynamic and relationship was captured perfectly! You could've made it an angsty fic if you made Shika marry Temari but have secret rendezvous with Ino and their child

But nevertheless, it was so heartwarming and I was just screaming at how adorable it is.

Lillian11 chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
It stinks?! Is that what you think?! Well, in my opinion, it was the best ShikaIno story I've read by far! And I would be MUCH MORE THAN GLAD if you would write another chapter, maybe even a sequel would be AMAZING! I'd really like to request another chapter! Please! xD
Jessie chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Absolutely love the way in which you have portrayed all the characters in this one-shot ! ! !
Good job _ xxx
nourmakky chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
i love the story :D

got so much potential. but the ending was's not BANG. you know? xD
it could be a lot better i suppose.

minor spelling error. :3 that's all!
cozieatbrains chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
i loveee it! nice plot! ive always liked shikaino stories that involves ino being prgnant or something
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
So cute! I love this couple and I want them to end up together somehow! Great story
fireiegurl chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
This is so good I love the ending u should write sequence of this
Surhenny chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
I so loved this,,

it made me cry but still loved it...

I'm a forever SHIKAINO fan.. _
AngelBaby5643 chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Omg best one shot ever! I loved it soooo cute! Heehhehe ;) please make another one!
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