Reviews for Burning
untilwehavesometeethmarks chapter 1 . 2/18/2017
Hiya, I'm the author of this, Hitsu-sama. I can no longer get into this account, due to not remembering my email. Either way, I'm just letting everyone know, NONE of these stories will ever be finished! I do not write fanfictions anymore, I have more important things to do. And I no longer like Hetalia. If you would like to finish the stories, feel free to write them yourself. I do not care. Any questions?.?
Perfect-Tempest chapter 1 . 7/11/2011



Not going to lie, this one-shot touched me. The way you delivered this story was perfect. There was no nonsense, it was straightforward, and painfully clear. Honestly, I'm not usually this affected by writing, but this has had an effect on me unlike anything else because it was so powerful. Reading this was excruciating because you establish a bond between the reader and Francis the minute you realize who he's running to and how he feels. It's a powerful connection and I am exceedingly moved by how skillfully it was executed.

Beautiful, beautiful story.

You have my highest praise.
sohmamisanaka chapter 1 . 12/26/2010

may I translate your fanfic into Vietnamese

ah, what is "exucution" mean? I can't find this word in my dictionary
The Animanga Girl chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
TT_TT I know how these stories of Jean end almost made me cry...
Peridot Tears chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
The last line is a pretty cliche one, to me, but you did a nice twist on it with the ellipsis, so that just made it better.

Succint. Emotional. The wording isn't new, but it works well.

All in all, liked it -nods-

Chalinaroses chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
Very well written, good job potraying the emotion. *favorites it*
Ruriri chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Oh... that was angsty! Poor Francis, though. And Jeanne D'Arc. Great work, by the way. I can't think of any spelling mistakes so... kudos to you! :D This is definitly going in my favorites! Awesome job! :)