Reviews for In love with you
jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 11 . 11/6/2014
aw I loved it make another one
jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 6 . 11/6/2014
wwwwwwwwwwwwhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaatttttttt?!
charlies a vamp? eh
jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 5 . 11/6/2014
oh no! what is going to happen?
jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 4 . 11/6/2014
lol I love it and I wish I could write like you but I do not
jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 3 . 11/6/2014
oooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh no!
jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 2 . 11/6/2014
lol I love the garbage trash one!
jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
awesome! keep it up
Child of Music and Imagination chapter 12 . 3/10/2014
MY BEST FRIEND IS A WEREWOLF!
Bell 1 chapter 11 . 6/8/2013
Although, you left several holes and questions, it was quite an interesting story.

Why does Paul have a place of his own as a high school student? Why would he be living alone?

I can see you enjoy writing, but I also see there is some growing room for you. ;) At times, Bella "acted" like a younger teenager/pree-teen (12-14), while other times, she seems to be about 16, or 17.

I'm glad Paul and Bella finally stopped playing games and decided to stop fighting the imprint. Paul seems very sweet, even though he was mean, or hurtful at times, but I think he was really playing off of Bella's "games" and trying to keep up.

The pre-engagement party was very sweet, but it seemed like they didn't get to spend much of iti together. :( Although, they had their own celebration, Paul went to all that effort and didn't spend much time WITH Bella at the beach party.

Sam seems like a very good, sweet, and caring brother/father-figure, but at the same time, he lets Bella get away with quite a bit. :P

Thank you for sharing your story with us. :D
Bell 1 chapter 2 . 6/8/2013
I like Charlie, so him as a bad guy is sad. Also, it is a bit creepy, knowing Charlie in the Twilight Saga is Bella's dad.
Wolfluver18 chapter 12 . 1/27/2013
I read a lot of your stories and I think the next one you should write is My Bestfriend is a Werewolf
Babysis64 chapter 11 . 2/15/2012
awe this was a good imprint story i thought anyways so thank you for sharing it with others yes they had their struggles but they made it through and i am glad and for Sam and Bella's dad i am glad that he won't see them again considering that he is in jail for life.
Babysis64 chapter 4 . 2/15/2012
well i do hope she does give Paul a chance to prove himself to her and also for her self to give that a chance and maybe they can love each other the way the imprint chose them to be soul mates i hope so
Babysis64 chapter 3 . 2/15/2012
wow thank goodness for Sam to be there for Bella but at the same time she doesn't really want Sam to protect her so she cuffed Paul and to tell you the truth he deserved it
Babysis64 chapter 2 . 2/15/2012
That was pretty gross on what that Charlie did if she didn't get away i bet he would of raped her but good thing she did get away and then to make things worse when Paul pushed her into the ocean that was not nice at all in my eyes he seems to be nice and mean at the same time to Bella
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