|Reviews for Witches Man, Witches|
| Eloquent Nocturne chapter 10 . 7/1/2011
Ehh sorry for not logging in... But Anyway! I love this so far. I cant wait to read more and I'm excited that there is so much up already. I actually read the prequel to this first and I have to point out that some of what Erik explains contradicts what was said in the prequel. Especially with the bit about WHY he ran away from the orphanage in the first place.
Either way. The dedication put into this fic shows through quite well and has made it very enjoyable to read. Great original idea. Great concept and character depth. Overall great job!
My only advice is that you read through through the chapters as there were a few mistakes here and there. Only real grammar mistake that really stuck to mr is that you should start a new line whenever the dialogue switches between characters instead of keepin it all jumbled up into the same paragraph.
Will put in another review after I've read some more :)
| Fenrir Lokison chapter 35 . 5/19/2011
Loved it. X3. also i discovered that im in the process of writing short stories about Organization XIII lol just an fyi. but ya. looking forward to the 2nd one.
| Webidolchiu94 chapter 35 . 5/12/2011
Sa: Good ending.
Ma: -blush- Wow
So: yes...that is a pretty good name, though
Sa: Altezio? Hmph I guess
Sa: M-maybe... ...that preview was cool though it's sad Kikami escaped what happened to ME? do I get married to Wes? -thoughtful look-
So &Ma: that'd be gross...
Ma: I'm your cousin and I marry soul so if you were to marry Wes thtd be plain icky because Wes is Soul's brother...
Sa: Why should I care abou that? I don't care...
Ma&So: No don't!
Sa: -runs away- Wes!
| TheManInTheHat chapter 35 . 5/11/2011
Hot damn. Hats off to you sir.
| Webidolchiu94 chapter 34 . 5/10/2011
another well-written chapter, i must say. You're a lot better at updating than I am...
What a way to go out...man, Erik, did you have to be just so d*mn heroic?
Er: It was the only way
Sa: Don't give me that, there's always another way.
So: Come off it, Sarah...
Sa: Go Away Soul, Im not speaking to you
Er: Well, if you would excuse me, Ill be fighting Dracula now
Maybe it could be called Warlocks and Kishins?
| Webidolchiu94 chapter 33 . 5/5/2011
DUUUUDE! big bro this was epic X5, get it? Lol.
Maka's arm is broken that'll be a challenge, no?
Well this is getting intereting, right?
Sa: I'm gonna kill this vamp who hurt my twi-er cousin!
Da: Yah, big sis Maka, right?
Ma: Yeah, I'll try
So: Don't push yourself too hard, Maka
B*: cause we're here
DTK: To back you up! Right girls?
Pa, Li, Tsu: Right!
Mi: Don't forget about us!
Er: I don't think they will after this, Minora, trust me...
| rockergurl95 chapter 2 . 3/31/2011
Wow this Is a mazing! Very detailed and the characters are IC too. Not that many stories have that. Very impressive. :))
| webidolchiu94 chapter 31 . 3/15/2011
Big brother: You're the bestest in the world! I'd never thought of a TWIN witch-hunter, perhaps I can borrow that? Hmmm did I review last time, if not, sorry! But thanks for the dedication, loved this chapter, i could definintley see this happening. Hope the finale sums up nicely and people don't get too hurt. Also, as to Heart and Soul, I might upload the picture of light soon onto Deviantart!
| Sarah Albarn chapter 29 . 2/17/2011
Nya~ computer still broken...yay iPod touch!
I lovvved this newest development and...
Update soon big brother!
| Ataku Hikaru chapter 29 . 2/11/2011
Ehhhh... It was... GREAT!
| xazavier009 chapter 28 . 2/4/2011
nice i just finish the series and love it now i need another fix
| webidolchiu94 chapter 28 . 2/1/2011
Wow, my heart was pumping the entire time!
Sa: That noise was very unsettling.
Da: Don't worry ane, we can take um'
Sa: Ya think? -eyes suddenly look despondent-
Da: what's wrong?
Sa: If...I don't make it Danny, I want you to run.
Da: What? What are you saying? I'm your partner no way.
Sa: You don't know what's going to happen, Danny. I'm just saying "in case"...give Soul this...-hands him an envelope-
Da:? Okay then...-puts it away- Lets go get them then?
Sa: Yeah, lets. -smirks half-heartedly-
| Ataku Hikaru chapter 27 . 1/27/2011
Kiddo has got a bit of idiot in him!
| Sarah Albarn chapter 27 . 1/26/2011
It's me...Wow. HAHA GREAT ...I was drunk...but I'm tired and will giev u a proper review later OK?
| Webidolchiu94 chapter 26 . 1/19/2011
Me: Whell this was an interesting chapter right here, huh?
Sa: I'm tired~ whew~
Sa: Tryin to help you review so quickly is a lot of work...plus, I need a break from the story!
Me: Break? Sure, you'll get sick soon.
Sa: I said a break! Not get sick!
Me: Same diff~ -_-
Sa: Is not!
Me: I think Erik needs a break, his soul Is going to break if he doesn't rest up!
Da: I agree...
Me...you're a creepy little boy, Danny.
Da: -blush- um...thank you?