Reviews for Forever Red
TaitanoRules555 chapter 15 . 1/31/2013
Another awesome swordplay written chapter but try to be more descriptive of your fights: ex:Tommy used the opportunity to swing around in a back kick that flipped the evil general over onto his own back. He stabbed downward with his sword, but Gerrok rolled over and blocked it with the Chrono Saber. The robot batted the attack away and slashed his opponent across the chest.
TaitanoRules555 chapter 14 . 1/31/2013
Awesome swordplay and use 'Don't play well with others.' (the marks) but keep up the good work.
TaitanoRules555 chapter 13 . 1/31/2013
Awesome written fight scene keep up the good work.
TaitanoRules555 chapter 12 . 1/31/2013
Interesting dialogue between Venjix and Leo which highlights a possible power rangers civil war. (that is if you want one in your fics?)
TaitanoRules555 chapter 11 . 1/31/2013
Don't forget your periods but its a good chapter.
TaitanoRules555 chapter 10 . 1/31/2013
Note: don't use he rolled his eyes use (insert name here) rolled his/her eyes oh and fixed your grammar but good chapter.
TaitanoRules555 chapter 9 . 1/31/2013
interesting idea to reference your other fic with this one.
TaitanoRules555 chapter 8 . 1/31/2013
Interesting chapter which filled the plotholes the show made and try to use the name's more often (ex: don't use "he said" alot try to use (insert name here) said got it?
TaitanoRules555 chapter 7 . 1/31/2013
another good chapter which highlights the villains relationship with each other.
TaitanoRules555 chapter 6 . 1/31/2013
Funny scene between Jason and Cole which highlights Cole's lack of knowledge about...
Everything.
TaitanoRules555 chapter 5 . 1/31/2013
You should change the font for flashback scenes? (if you want to)
TaitanoRules555 chapter 4 . 1/31/2013
Will the extra dialogue play a part in the future?
TaitanoRules555 chapter 3 . 1/31/2013
try to fix the quotation marks but this is a good fic.
TaitanoRules555 chapter 2 . 1/31/2013
This is pretty good so far keep up the good work.
TaitanoRules555 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
This is good try to make each chapter longer next time all right if you want to
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