Reviews for Fighter
Blackheart chapter 9 . 1/13/2011
I love you. No seriously. This is the only fanfic like this for Torres and Lightman. And I needed it soooooo badly *sobs*. You've made the next few moths of my life. lol...

I love you. I'm sorry, am I freaking you out!
Ruingaraf chapter 9 . 12/4/2010
Brilliant writing and characterization, even down to Eva. I loved the little allusions to Lightman/Foster and Loker/Torres as well. That said, I do love the mentorship bond between these two, and I feel you pulled it off wonderfully. An excellent read overall.
oceanspurplesun chapter 9 . 11/8/2010
awww, that's so sweet. I love how Cal can be such a jerk and then totally switch to being a...father figure, i guess.

This is so good. Well done. :]
xxshilohx chapter 9 . 11/3/2010
*clap clap clap clap clap* excellent story!
song Eun-mi chapter 9 . 11/3/2010
That was such a fantastic final chapter! It really brought the story to a close as you went back to the beginning in a sense, explained it and moved on, and I LOVED the heart to heart between Cal and Ria at the end, it felt like it should be a script from the show! And the last few sentences were just genius! Please write some more for lie to me soon (Ria/Cal?) you have a real talent for it and I love reading your fics!

love Renette (Eun-mi)xxxxx
Lisyx chapter 9 . 11/3/2010
Looooooooove this chapter! Love the end. It's great to see he can accept his own feeling, and told them to the concerned people.

Can't wait for more!
The Goliath Beetle chapter 9 . 11/2/2010
I just came across this story yesterday and I loved it! You're awesome! :P
oceanspurplesun chapter 8 . 11/1/2010
oh, please please please let Torres come back! she's my favourite character...other than loker, lol.
Song Eun-mi chapter 8 . 11/1/2010
That was quite possibly the best chapter yet! I love the relationship between Ria and Gillian, it's getting kind of like mother and daughter now and I get the impression Ria needs a mom... no really, this chapter was great! And you can't let Ria leave! SHe belongs with the lightman group! Please update soon, and are you planning another story after this?

Renette (your my friend now, you can have my English name!Feel privaliged! ;))xxxxxx
Lisyx chapter 8 . 11/1/2010
Wow! talk between Cal and Ava? great! can't wait fo more! yeah, again.
glouton-mana chapter 7 . 10/31/2010
It's so great story !
Song Eun-mi chapter 7 . 10/31/2010
That was fantastic! I actually cried at the bit at the end, which I have never done over a fanfic before, it was just so real and emotional! And please please please let Ria change her mind about quitting! She can't quit, she's amazing and the Lightman group really need her! She just needs to speak to someone about what happened and she'll be fine...right? PLease dont let her leave, and update soon, I'm going to be on edge all day until I find out what happens!

Eun-mi (Renette)xxxxx
oceanspurplesun chapter 6 . 10/29/2010
OH. MY. GOSH. Cliffhanger much? Pleeeeease write another chapter ;]
Song Eun-mi chapter 6 . 10/29/2010
OMG OMG OMG I definately wasn't expecting that! Don't worry about the chapter being short, I think it worked best like that; short, straight in with the action and then a HUGE cliffhanger ending! OMG hope Ria will be OK please say she's just been shot in the stomach or something nothing fatal please she can't die! And please please please update soon the ending of this is gonna be haunting me until I know what happens! Keep up the great work, this is such an amazing story!

love Eun-mi (Renette) xxx
Lisyx chapter 6 . 10/29/2010
AGAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN! '

Want more. With Cal/ria! ) ... please?
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