Reviews for BETRAYED |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's truly an AU, but it's definitely a good one. Good job, just a few spelling errors. Thesaursus would help a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm with Abby on this—Tony needs all the positive thoughts he can get, and Tim is NOT helping with his selfishness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found your story and liked it immensely. I am not a fan of McGee. Your ending was perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you! I have always found skinny McGee with the super white teeth to be annoying! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story. Thanks for writing and sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() the first line of this chapter made me laugh hard. thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Umm, you do realize it's really easy to tell who was driving in a collision right? Only one of them would have injuries from the steering wheel, not to mention the safety belts go seperate directions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was never able to warm up to Tim either, early Tim was better than the Tim who came after Jenny though (when Harmon took over the show basically). Tim became a conceited jerk. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just finished this one last night. I found it unique in its approach. One of the few times that McGee managed to be an arrogant ass without Ziva encouraging him. I did like that you redeemed Leon. Jackie wouldn't love him if he didn't have some good qualities. Though I have some problems with the uneven way that Ziva was written on the show and really couldn't see TIVA since they both have so many trust issues, I did like the idea that she would learn what it meant to work on a team and have a partner, and they'd become friends at least. Thanks so much for sharing your talent. I'm keeping this one to reread for the humor as well as the good plot. |
![]() ![]() an awesome read, thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent Story! Unusual to see a 'bad' McGee especially w/o Ziva egging him on but it works well here. Nice bit of redemption for Vance. Just enough to let him do what had to be done but still self-serving as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds like Vance. Never liked him. For one thing, he always seemed way too close to Eli David and like Eli more concerned w/ success than the well-being of his people. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome work :) I had no idea I would enjoy a bad Tim so much ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Evil McGee AND Evil Vance ! You don't do things by half, do you? ;) Great work ! |
![]() ![]() Wow thoroughly enjoyed this tale. |