Reviews for BETRAYED
Vadercat chapter 15 . 1/3
It's truly an AU, but it's definitely a good one. Good job, just a few spelling errors. Thesaursus would help a lot.
Mako-clb chapter 5 . 11/1/2023
I'm with Abby on this—Tony needs all the positive thoughts he can get, and Tim is NOT helping with his selfishness.
Rosemoor chapter 15 . 5/24/2023
Just found your story and liked it immensely. I am not a fan of McGee. Your ending was perfect.
Dawn248 chapter 15 . 2/26/2023
Thank you! I have always found skinny McGee with the super white teeth to be annoying!
farawisa chapter 15 . 5/20/2022
Loved this story. Thanks for writing and sharing!
mailformisc9089 chapter 12 . 8/21/2021
the first line of this chapter made me laugh hard. thank you
Acacia Jules chapter 3 . 8/19/2021
Umm, you do realize it's really easy to tell who was driving in a collision right? Only one of them would have injuries from the steering wheel, not to mention the safety belts go seperate directions.
Acacia Jules chapter 2 . 8/19/2021
I was never able to warm up to Tim either, early Tim was better than the Tim who came after Jenny though (when Harmon took over the show basically). Tim became a conceited jerk.
TerriTrek chapter 1 . 7/3/2021
I just finished this one last night. I found it unique in its approach. One of the few times that McGee managed to be an arrogant ass without Ziva encouraging him. I did like that you redeemed Leon. Jackie wouldn't love him if he didn't have some good qualities. Though I have some problems with the uneven way that Ziva was written on the show and really couldn't see TIVA since they both have so many trust issues, I did like the idea that she would learn what it meant to work on a team and have a partner, and they'd become friends at least. Thanks so much for sharing your talent. I'm keeping this one to reread for the humor as well as the good plot.
lunaz chapter 15 . 6/22/2021
an awesome read, thank you.
BMS chapter 15 . 4/15/2021
Excellent Story!
Unusual to see a 'bad' McGee especially w/o Ziva egging him on but it works well here. Nice bit of redemption for Vance. Just enough to let him do what had to be done but still self-serving as well.
BMS chapter 5 . 4/15/2021
Sounds like Vance. Never liked him.
For one thing, he always seemed way too close to Eli David and like Eli more concerned w/ success than the well-being of his people.
catonmic33 chapter 15 . 2/10/2021
Awesome work :) I had no idea I would enjoy a bad Tim so much !
catonmic33 chapter 5 . 2/9/2021
Evil McGee AND Evil Vance ! You don't do things by half, do you? ;) Great work !
Guest chapter 15 . 3/22/2020
Wow thoroughly enjoyed this tale.
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