|Reviews for He's the One|
| loverofhell chapter 1 . 7/4
Good start ...like the chapter and keep writing more ok
| The Crystal Pen chapter 11 . 7/2
So much happened in the last two chapters to end so happily. It felt like a dark cloud dissipating to reveal a glowing sun! Good work!
| littlemichiru chapter 11 . 10/26/2016
I totally loved this story. I am sorry I couldn't review every chapter. I was on the phone and I didn't have the time to write reviews. Also my eyes were hurting terribly but I decided to jump on the computer to write a review and favorite the story.
It was an amazing story. At first I was like, Yami a doll? adorable! But how will it work? But seeing it had many chapters I knew you would work with it. Then you brought it Ryou and his bunny, Bakura, and Malik and Marik. So cute!
I felt bad for poor Yugi but I kept thinking also that he should have gotten the doll. Yumi was a toy killer. But everything worked out for the best, even if I felt my heart breaking at the scene where Bakura died. Ryou adored his little bunny.
I am going to read this story again for sure. Thank you for giving it to us.
| MizukiRakuen chapter 11 . 3/14/2016
Me gusto tu historia, aunque creo que yami y yugi debieron haber hablado mas
| DisneyGirl10 chapter 11 . 2/15/2016
Okay, I can't hold this in anymore.
As much as I liked this, I still am ticked off at how this ended!
Like, I DEMAND an explanation!
And seriously, I thought there would be more to it than this! Sorry if I'm sounding negative, but I can't let this go unnoticed! I have to vent this out!
And there HAS to be a sequel or a seriously long one shot to explain this spell they were supposedly on, what happens next, etc! I mean, an author who leaves serious fans of Yugi and Yami and co hanging with that cliffhanger is seriously wack! No offense, at all! I just can't stand it! Oh, why must I have strong feels for Yu-Gi-Oh and Yugi X Yami and all that?
Sorry if I offended you at all but let's be honest here. Why end it like that? Why I ask you? WHY?!
You can PM if you want so we can further discuss this cause I have much more to say about this.
Other than that, it wasn't that bad of a story. In between, looks like it.
| SweetAnimeLover chapter 11 . 11/16/2015
It's a great story
| Yami Alchemist chapter 11 . 7/30/2014
I admit, I had a fangirl moment at the end of this story. I think the ending is absolutely perfect and anything more would just drag it out. Thank you so much for writing such an awesome and cute story! It made my day totally!
| Lala chapter 11 . 6/8/2014
I've waited so long for this story's ending and here's what I've got to say. In song form:
You've come such a long, long way
And I've watched you from that very first day
To see how might grow
To see what you might do
To see what you've been through
And hoe you've made me proud of you
I see now that your time has come
You've grown up and your new time has begun
To go where you will
To do what will do
To meet all new people
For it's time for you
To fulfill your destiny!
I hope that doesn't sound weird. That's just my way of showing how much I've been analyzing and waiting all these three years. And I'm happy to see that you've accomplished something so great as this. I'm proud of you.
| Anonymous chapter 11 . 5/18/2014
Not bad ending! I like it!
| StarGlow chapter 11 . 4/20/2014
Please make another story out of this.
I'm already missing it.
| Kidiu chapter 11 . 3/31/2014
This was really interesting, very unique. I wish there was more! I still have many questions, like how they ended up as a doll, bunny, or inside someone else's body in the first place. Thank you for this awesome storu!
| Aisheyrufox chapter 11 . 1/2/2014
CUTEST STORY EVER! LOVE IT!
| Aisheyrufox chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
This sounds freaking adorable and I am going to continue reading it. 3
| Mana Shay chapter 11 . 12/28/2013
Awww I loooooooovvvvvvvvveeeeeeee the ending it came out better than I had expected the wait for the last chapter was worth it cause you had to take your time on it. Also look out my story called the land of secrets
| Yana5 chapter 11 . 12/19/2013