Reviews for Pain, Pleasure and Lust
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
I see this is all from Megatron's point of view, but all of a sudden, I began to wonder how this event was like from Optimus's point of view.
Tinyterror chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
Do you think you could make a sequel?
Jazzilynn Hall chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Very interesting story! I like it!
Jeegoo chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
It's really nice to see a fic where Optimus doesn't turn into a sobbing, helpless uke just because something bad happens. I'm not too familiar with TFA, but I'm really impressed with your characterization! It was incredibly refreshing, and I'm only sorry I didn't read this fic earlier. Megatron comes across as an incredibly fscked up and vicious monster (sadism AND masochism? niiiiiice!) and seeing Optimus fight back to the last, and then some really does reflect his courage and fortitude that you see in canon. Thank you very much for writing this fic!
LadyBlackArachnia chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
So damn good! I couldn't stop reading! I enjoyed this one thank you! I picture Megatron and Optimus reacting the same way if confronted like this! Love it! Hope you write more like this!
tediz-leader chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Best. Story. EVER.

No really, I love the fact you made our little OP fight to the very end! Almost inspiring, really :D
Now an Inactive Blog chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Wow... Well done... You mother fucker...

Poor prime, he fought so hard... And you made Megatron such a ASS!

Good job!
Autobotally45 chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
This was a very good story
Happyfish chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
queensguider chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
is this megatrons point of view of the interfacing scenefrom your story "oh cruel fate"? because they seem almost identical to me.
kara ashford chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
First off, I want to say that this is a very well written piece. You've kept everyone in character (particularly Optimus, which is great to see in this sort of fic)and your writing style is both descriptive and engaging. I don't normally go for Optimus/Megatron and your story is probably the only exception.

That being the case, this is most certainly not dub-con. This is straight up rape - although non-con could be argued - so you should really put that in your summary, or at least remove the dub-con reference in your summary. I liked your fic anyway, but there's a big difference between dub-con and what you have here. Just thought I should point it out.
Lady Beelze chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Gah! DX

that was another exxxcelent fanfic about one of my fav yaoi couples. I loved it from begining to end; the way you described megatron's thoughts, feelings, and the growing obssesion he felt for optimus was somehow morbid (or maybe just me). When he catched optimus and raped him..usually i hate rapes, but this one was..agh! must read it! So much pain and lust together did an amazing combination! When it cames to end and megatron looked optimus same as "other" i felt really bad; but then he rose and changed the whole end.. amazing! an incredible work I totally love it and congratulate you for keeping me sit all this minutes reading. English isn't my native languaje but i totally enjoyed the reading.
Crossfire1205 chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
In a word: wow! You have done it again, m'dear! You are such a talented writer! Keep it up! I love your stories and this was very, very good. Shows Prime's true fighting spirit, till the end!I want moar!
Optimus'girl chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
I as shocked that in this story Optimus was trying to fight back instand of begging Megatron to stop and leave him alone! Optimus sure was very brave will facing that tyrant Megatron! Growling, hissing, and even trying to bite the evil tyrant, Megatron! I am shocked that he didn't even start crying after what Megatron had done to him the big bully! How dare he do that to Optimus! How could he be so mean to my sweet beloved, Optimus besides that jerk Sentinel! They both make me sooo mad for the way that they both treated Optimus!
Wolf Prime chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Awesome story! It's bad that there is not a continue TT you made the last part stay will a continue XD

I love your stories! Please do more about them -

I have a question: did you not going to continue your fic The Rage Within? I love this story, it helped me to my own version of Optimus -

Excellent story! You have a10!
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