|Reviews for Breathless Anticipation|
| LittleRedDevil8 chapter 7 . 9/19/2014
This may seem a little weird but I just wanted to thank you for writing. From the bottom of my heart. I always loved Cameron and thirteen and always felt like a weirdo bc of it.
| Keepscrolling chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
Great story but, please write without the line underneath the letters.
| Sk8euzenherb chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
The end of this chapter totally reminds me of the first time Alice and Dana kissed in L word.
Anyway, nice story
| Normal-is-Overratedx chapter 7 . 10/12/2011
This was good, I liked it. You should do like, a prequel to
the epilogue or something. The drama of trying
to adopt - The child might have had an iffy life
before that and will need to learn to trust them,
and then the drama of Cameykinz pregasuarus. And whatever
else you might think of. (: Anyway, I've read like every one
of your stories on here, they're all good and creative so I hope
you write more.
| RainboIsland chapter 5 . 8/17/2011
Cute. I love the pseudo-family-ness of this. I just plain out love your stories. (the big bang theory Yay!)
| RainboIsland chapter 4 . 8/17/2011
Yay! Remy and CAmeron can be together at last!
| RainboIsland chapter 3 . 8/17/2011
I loved this chapter. (Yesssss sex!) I love the word fornicate, in all forms. I also for some reason loved the use of pikachu. I've read a bit of smut..., ppikachu is new. And happy very very very very very very very belated birthday.
| RainboIsland chapter 2 . 8/17/2011
I really like this story. (I don't know why.) I'm thinking I should probably watch The L Word.
| Dominyka chapter 7 . 6/8/2011
I loved this story. A sequel is a must. I would be highly upset if there wasn't. I want to find out more about how Cameron and Thirteen are keeping their perfect life together and not falling apart by having children. PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL TO THIS! I would love you forever.
| CJ4Eva chapter 7 . 1/26/2011
I enjoyed the final chapter. Tied up the loose ends well and gave this fic a nice conclusion. ;)
| CJ4Eva chapter 6 . 1/26/2011
Revenge, never seems to work even if though through.
| CJ4Eva chapter 5 . 1/26/2011
Love the protectiveness. Well written.
| CJ4Eva chapter 4 . 1/26/2011
Not sure what to make of Chase's behaviour but he shouldn't have done it.
| CJ4Eva chapter 3 . 1/26/2011
| CJ4Eva chapter 2 . 1/26/2011
Another intense chapter. Enjoyable ;)