Reviews for Separate Sisters
Stormchilde chapter 2 . 1/10/2006

Such a sweet moment between two sisters that was over too soon.


Claripup chapter 2 . 5/22/2004
So sweet... I cried
But I would like to see more... maybe a sequel?
DragonPeaceEnvoy chapter 2 . 2/18/2004
Not bad; I got a mysterious tightness in my throat and some watering of my eyes. *emotion* This is a reasonably effective short story (of two chapters, but still short)-it drives home the message. Poignant message at that. (T_T)
Sincerely C-P-E AKA Loretta
AP Especially chapter 2 . 12/24/2002
I can see why Kris would eventually follow in Jill's footsteps and join forces with Charlie. Nice story.
Duke chapter 2 . 9/10/2002
I like the way that Jill trys to make amends to her baby sister. Also Kris as the young child trying to be older than she is is a great characterization. Great job MaryRose.
Ali chapter 2 . 3/22/2002
LOL...well that was sweet. A bit short, but then again, how many complexities could an 8yo have, right? LOL I liked it! I always wondered what they were like as little kids... Very cute :)
Amanda chapter 1 . 3/12/2002
Cute story please keep up the good work.
Karen chapter 1 . 3/10/2002
Cute story. Keep writing.
Krystina chapter 1 . 3/7/2002
Awww...thats cute! :)