|Reviews for Debaucherous Pastime|
| KCEverdeen chapter 8 . 1/3
Okay. So, review time. I was actually extremely disappointed with this story. Even though your detailing is really good, I didn't like the slowness in their relationship development. It was dragged out a little too long. It could have been a little faster. I also didn't like Maka's personality in this story. She was too confident and open to something like sex. She is shy and isn't into that stuff or even looking it up. Their relationship needed to be sweet not rushed and Soul being so innocent. I really bothered me. I really enjoy your writing style and ideas but this story disappointed me. I only am saying this because I know your good at writing and know you can do better! ;)
| Mobiusman3 chapter 11 . 11/23/2013
If there was ever a phrase to describe my expression during this, it would the shit-eatingest face ever of all time.
| Acidpond chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Lol blair you silly cat I love u
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Lol blair you silly cat thing
| GreatZero chapter 11 . 10/25/2013
| Choleandderekxoxsoulandmakaxox chapter 11 . 7/26/2013
This must be continued! XD
| animandaxd chapter 11 . 7/11/2013
Omgthisissocute also I love yor chapter titles
| TurtleDovesRule chapter 11 . 7/9/2013
I love this. Yes, I understand... it's different than your average SoMa fanfic, but it's still good.
It did make me cringe a little when they decided to have a no strings attached thing, but it wasn't a bad cringe. It just made me sad as a SoMa fan to see them agree to something like that, but I like fanfics that make you hurt a little. As weird as it sounds, it makes me savor the character development more. It also makes me crave the "I love you " and appreciate it more once it is said. I cannot begin to tell you how happy I was when Soul said it. Now, I'm just waiting on Maka! They're too cute.
Can I say that your lemons are probably the best written I've found in SoMa fanfics? You got all the nasty components, but you also show enough emotion so that it's not just plainly vulgar. There are some fanfics that are JUST vulgar. I definitely appreciate the balance you have on this.
Anyway... this is one long review. I'm looking forward to your update and to the end of this great fanfic!
| yume mabe chapter 11 . 7/8/2013
hahaha looking forward to next's
| lizzysakura21 chapter 11 . 6/28/2013
Haha oh man safe word apples and bananas the awesomeness of that xD
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/17/2013
Oh my god soo cool but make make said he loves him in an awsome way .. Like fighting or something :p
| thewicked1 chapter 11 . 6/15/2013
Awesome chapter, I loved it!
| Sylvan Moon chapter 11 . 6/13/2013
Thanks so much for updating! I kinda forgot about this story so I re-read the whole thing and am all hot and bothered for Soul and Maka all over again. I'll be looking forward to you finishing this story.
| Foxsoul chapter 11 . 6/13/2013
An excellently written story, even separate from the equally well-written lemons. WANT MORE!
| s0ulmatch3r chapter 11 . 6/13/2013
OMFG THIS IS HILARIOUS HAHAHAHAHAHAHA ANYTHING IS BETTER THAN BANANAS LOLZZZZ