|Reviews for Crimson|
| jj chapter 69 . 6/24
Just spent like three days in row reading this wow that was great a few things gs I didn't like but over all that was assume u have great talent my friend great talent indeed and I hope u keep writing such wonderful stories
U made me laugh cry and cheer out loud with this amusing story thanks
| Drifter chapter 39 . 5/26
You just used japanese. Google translate japanese.
| LabontesGirl43 chapter 44 . 5/19
I absolutely love this story and think it is by FAR the most well written and original story I've read on this site!
I do have one question that isn't really a big deal, and since the story was completed some time ago I'm sure you're not checking these reviews anymore...but I'm confused as to the time difference between Iro and Earth... when Vegeta original went it was unspecified. When Trunks went you mentioned he was in hypersleep for the entire trip which lasted a month. But when Trunks went back to earth after watching Vegeta's execution it was less than a week. Now, as they're flying back the boys have been pranking the crew members "for weeks"... just curious as to the time jump!
But, as I said before - amazing story!
| Mysteec chapter 69 . 5/14
I will have to say out of all the stories I have read, this one of the few-very few-that have well over a thousand reviews, which I find astounding. But its no wonder when the story is done so well; not to mention the fact that there are sixty-nine lengthy chapters total. Last time I read this is when it was still around chapter twenty-something and still going. Out of curiosity I had read up on this story again months later, to see what was going in the story, but I no longer knew what was happening and lost interest for quite a few more months before I got the itch to read it again. It wasn't until a couple of days ago that I decided that I would give this fic another chance and read it again-this time all the way through, from start to finish. Besides Vegeta's execution, one of the other lighter scenes that sticks out is when Bulma found out Piccolo had been withholding VERY important information from her and then proceeded to chase the Namek with the then relatively new toy that the Krimzon's had given them and actually SHOOTING the green man with it. I laughed for a good five minutes over that one, just picturing it in my head. The other one was when near the end of the story Vegeta starts laughing and just can't stop-As it was, I had stayed up late reading this particular segment in the wee hours of ten til four in the morning-and wouldn't you know it, I start cackling right along and couldn't stop much the same way Vegeta was carrying on. It was a bit...disturbing, lol.
I also could never figure out how old Hui actually is. You kept saying he was young, a youth, and back when he and Kurenai fought 12 years earlier, he was old enough to utter the spell that bound them together, but unless I missed the answer to my question somewhere within the fic, I'm assuming he's probably only a little older than Gohan? Plus I think another reason why he hadn't "grown up" mentally was also because of the stone. By the way, I like how you threw in the Lord of the Rings reference in there. One Ring To Rule Them All. *Cue dramatic soundtrack
Anywho, thanks for the excellent read!
| leneypoo chapter 69 . 5/6
I had come across this story a couple of years ago and it basically consumed a couple of days of my life as it was just so good. I followed the story then but I fell off on reading each update. But recently I found the story again and realized it was complete and once again I found another myself reading this whenever I could for a few days.
Thank you for writing this brilliant story. Everything was great.
Though I do feel a bit bad for Hui, he really seemed like a spoiled kid, especially when he was defeated. I'd like to think that those same psychotherapists that were given to Vegeta were also given to him, because I can't help but feel that there was potential for some rehabilitation. Especially knowing that some external device may have been exacerbating the worst of his personality.
| calcu22 chapter 39 . 5/3
I've been reading this story for the past few days and decided I should leave a few reviews for this lovely story. A little more then half way threw and it's already my favorite dbz story. All the characters are in characters and doing things, and the whole idea of them having to fight a war without their ki is great. Not to mention that I always like fics with periods of dark and light moments, and you seem to have the ideal balance between the two. Just, great all around really.
| Kia chapter 69 . 3/12
It was a fantastic series! I love how you redeemed Vegeta, yet retained his core personality. The story was well-paced, and I really, really love your great plot! I also liked how you pulled in the other characters, including the families, yet the central plot still revolved around Vegeta. I really enjoyed reading this!
| aliennepton chapter 69 . 3/2
*clap clap clap*
Totally love your story! Its been a while I read a good one! One of the best!
| Moriarty-Mastermind chapter 69 . 1/15
After a long time of putting this story off after I stopped participating in the DBZ fandom. I have to say: Amazing. Simply AMAZING. This was a fantastic story from start to finish, and I'm so glad I finished reading it (even if it did take a bit). Great job, simply amazing.
| supersaiyaman chapter 50 . 1/10
wow i hope all this is worth it in the end.i hope vegeta gets hue and kills goku that silly keep up the good work.
| supersaiyaman chapter 49 . 1/10
so will he use the bluprints persanaly or try geting it someplace else very good chapter.
| supersaiyaman chapter 48 . 1/10
how is vegeta going to kill getting too him will be hard.i like your story i will most defenitly be downlaoding it too my computer.
| Vegeta fan chapter 28 . 1/5
Hi! This is like the third time i'm reading your fic. I love it.
I've always thought that Vegeta's past never got much space in DbZ, and I never understood why, because it had such potential. Anyway, i actually wanted to ask you if you could please upload this story in Ao3. The format there is easier, and since they don't have restrictions, or not as many as this site, we don't run the risk of your story getting flagged and eliminated. It's cool if you don't want to, its yours after all. I hope you'll write something new soon. Happy New Year!
| supersaiyaman chapter 45 . 1/3
i hope that vegeta dosnt get posned is very clever and skilled so he should do will be intresting to see how the outher z warrors fare.
| cmannin1 chapter 69 . 1/2
Yes, it is finally over. It is truly bitter sweet. I'm happy for it to end in a nice pleasent way, but i'm sad too, for it was oneof, if not the best story I have ever read!
GothicDream, Thank you so much for writing and creating this wonderful world for me to experiance. If anything, I would like for you to think about the possibilites of making one-shots about Turble, during his time on the Vegeta planet in the afterlife with his Father.
Another one could be a quick follow up with Fin and Vegeta sometime after the event and Bra is born.
Please comtinue to write.