I loved this story so much! I'm so glad to stumble onto it. The emotions, the different characters and their developments, the vivid details of the scene and expressions were just great. The cliff hangers and the unexpected twists with the foreshadowing just add more to how thoughtful and creative this story was. I really enjoyed and I'm intrigued to read more of you work :)

I knew some of these terms sounded familiar! Although Vegeta is important, I'm glad you're working hard on balancing everyone's input to these team meetings. It's a hard thing to do with the DB cast.

I come back to re-read this entirely every couple years and the irony of Android 17 saving Trunks is just hitting me. Wonder what Future Trunks would make of that.

I love Goku in this chapter! Rushing to help even without his powers, a little scattered (which is pretty normal for him), and being a little defensive about the power pole. Sure hope they let Goten know Trunks is okay next chapter, poor kiddo :(. There's no way it'll be this easy whenever the next wave arrives.

Vegeta's horrible past is going to be awfully useful. I mean 'awfully' in both ways. I liked the little telepathy mention. Chichi gets a lot of sh*t but she really can pick up on the normal stuff Goku is clueless about. 17 being flustered with Marron is so cute!

Another continent? Damn. Lucky that Kinto-un is so fast or Goten and Trunks wouldn't have made it until way too late. I kind of like that Goku's needle-fear is so ingrained that he struggles to overcome it even when Vegeta's life depends on it. It's not a heroic look, but it feels real, because fears like that are irrational.

O M G, actual stakes! I love when Vegeta's tactics and alien knowledge can actually be useful. So excited to read on!

Hi, I no longer have a fanfic account but I'm coming back to save this fic to my computer and let you know it is one of my favorite fanfics of all time. I would love to see you move this and rerelease it on AO3, myself and many others worry about how long this website will exist. It's domain is currently registered until 2028 and some folks have thought due to the low traffic that the site might go down after that.

Anyway I hope you are doing well and still writing!

Decided to reread this since I love it so much! I think my favorite part about this fanfic has to be the worldbuilding. It is a chore to find Dragon Ball fics that explore the outside universe as well as this and integrate them into the story so often and so well. As much as I love Dragon Ball, we never really get much info about the universe's workings, and how it's operated on a galactic basis, since Earth is probably the only planet in the universe separated from the interconnectedness of the rest of it. It's just so fun to see all of these civilizations and factions pop out like this.

I’ve come back and re-read this story many times. I can’t always put a thumb on what exactly it is but when I think about the endless possibilities of story telling in the DBZ universe this story stands out as one of the best. The world building is gripping and FEELS as large as space. The build up to “that scene” was excellent and the emotion from reading it still comes up even though I know how it ends. I really love this story and wish I could have a printed copy on my bookshelf. Thank you again from a long time (and now much older) reader.

Hey. So this fic I read way back when you were still updating. I think I joined in back when you were on chapter 3 and it was one of the first fics I religiously followed to completion. I was strolling down memory lane on my FFN account (cos I mostly use AO3 now) and instantly remembered this being my favorite fic and sat down to read it all over again. And I gotta say. Past me had excellent taste cos this fic still holds up as being fantastic. I don't remember if I ever commented in the past, but I just thought I'd let you know how much I love and appreciate this fic. It holds a special place in my heart and has a lot of fond memories of excitement when seeing that you'd updated. I'm a vegeta bitch til I die so this fic is like my child. Thank you!

Incredible story! I’ve thoroughly enjoyed it! So hard to put down! Thank you for such a fun ride!

WOW! You may have taken more than 3 years to complete this story but you have made it a masterpiece. Hats Off!
The scenes were so gripping but just as realistic. I could relate to it. Heck, I could see them in my head , the detailing was that perfect ( neither boringly long nor very less)! I would love read more of your works! Also if it's not too demanding I would really really love to read a sequel of this story . LOBE U!

I trully have no words. This fanfiction is one of the best ,if not the best, I have ever read. The story , the characters , the pacing ,EVERYTHING about this fanfiction was amazing ! I read the whole story in about three days! You made me fall in love with non canon characters like Fenn , Midori , POP and Kurenai.
But dudeee. Hui was something else! Its the first story that I have ever been terrified by the villian ! The way you described him was absolutaly fantastic!
Especially with the execution scene!... OMG that was both painfull to read but at the same time so good!
But I have to say that the true gem of the story was vegeta . You gave him back what the show took away form him and that is his brains . Every scene with him was what I was really looking forward to read ! His fights were amazing! Both on the field and as a tactician ! His whole character was at point and I love the fact that the impacts of the story on his character were clear. In the otherworld scene , you shown that the execution and his torture were not a joke and I really liked the fact that you made the other characters understand him better. From a monster in the universe's eyes you turn him into a hero . I also loved the moment he became Nox ! That was so clever !
Lastly the final battle ! It was brilliant ! Hui is at a young age so it makes so much sense that he couldnt fought so well in one on one combat fight . And the moment when vegeta took the crystal and put it on himself ... that was unexpecting ! I was really surprised with his intentions when he start speaking with kurenai in front of the universe!
Anyway I hope you are ok and this review reach you ! Be well ! And keep up the great work!

Uh oh, the aliens are about to land now and all hinges on the androids and Buu. I'm curious about what Vegeta's idea is that he is worried about. Excited to see how this all unravels!