|Reviews for Shadow Of A Doubt|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/13
While I was reading this, every five minutes I found myself murmuring "this is SUCH a good fic" to myself. The way you wove the italicized bits from the dream in was very nice. I liked how you wrote the father-son-like relationship Roy and Ed have, especially their conversation in the last scene. Everyone felt super in character. You have a very compelling writing style, and just pulled me in and got me hooked with the first few paragraphs. I loved reading this!
| Silvershadowe chapter 1 . 3/9
So good! There are no words that can fully sum up how amazing this story is! Writing is impeccable, characters believable, plot interesting... Just wonderful!
| yummypie193 chapter 1 . 3/2
My hearttttt ahhhhhhhhhhh
(I may or may not be going through all your FMA stories and reading them right now...)
| BlackCatRunning chapter 1 . 1/11
Beautiful story. I was totally absorbed. Thank you so much for writing!
| daisysakura chapter 1 . 1/2
Wow. Just wow. I'm not sure how to put into words how amazing this was. The friendship is beautiful and I loved every bit of this story so much! This was, without a shadow of doubt, the best thing I've read in a long time.
| httpkirby chapter 1 . 12/28/2016
| HeavenDragonSlayer chapter 1 . 11/21/2016
Yep. I confess. I want to practically marry this story it was so good.
Write more like this, or I might not survive!
| Lala Sharada chapter 1 . 9/23/2016
This story is so amazingly fantastic! I love it so much! I think I first read it probably like a year ago actually, but never faved or reviewed it back then, though I remember liking it a lot. Can't fathom why I didn't say anything the first time, this story deserves all the praise!
Anyway, today I was bit with a heady parental!RoyEd bug, and I immediately went digging around the FF.N archives for this story, because I remember it exemplified everything I love about parental!RoyEd. And I was not disappointed the second time around. Your writing skills continue to impress. And you always, always, without a doubt, flawlessly get every character's voice and nuances just right. Like, dear jeez, I love your writing and FMA stories so much!
This was such a great read, and I loved how both and Ed and Roy became more vulnerable and opened up to each other- though it did suck that that vulnerability had to come about through such horrific injuries. But they were able to unveil such vulnerable burdens to each other, because they trusted the other enough, and that's a very wonderful thing.
| Thdossa chapter 1 . 8/17/2016
This is a nice one-shot. The characters are thrown into a situation that is unusual for them but their behavior seems still true to their character. A lot of their emotions and fear were suggested in subtle ways instead of just beeing stated. I really liked it! It was moving and exciting at the same time. Thank you!
| HappyTheDragon18 chapter 1 . 7/1/2016
I REALLY liked this story! I'm always looking for those Parental! Royed fics, and so this one probably tops them all! Keep up the good work! :)
| Akarri chapter 1 . 5/19/2016
Greatest (and longest) one-shot I have ever read. Roy and Ed's conversation in the mine and in Ed's dreams tore at my very soul~~~ okay, maybe not so dramatic but I still loved every moment of it. Those parental moments just kill me. This is definitely going on my exclusive "prenatal!royEd fics to re-read later" list. Thank you for writing this gem.
| inuyashamunkey chapter 1 . 5/7/2016
| Attackoneverything chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
Love me some Roy!ed parental XD
Loved your fanfic! :D XD
| TransformingTurtle chapter 1 . 3/29/2016
I loved every second of this. Thank you for writing such a brilliant story!
| SakuraWindChime chapter 1 . 3/26/2016
Oh wow, this was just amazing! The emotions were so raw and you wrote this so well!