Reviews for If Only You Really Knew
Dunas Priest chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
wow

this was really, really good.

i'm real impressed with the concept you came up with.

great job
ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
A great story. Very well written.
Mute Wordsmith chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
I'll be honest...

...I kinda liked this fic. XD
furyofthetimelords chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
Oooooh...

awesome.

Dark and tottally makes sense.I always like seeing the POV of a psycho. ;)

Keep writing awesome,

Bookninja15 XD
Veronica chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
hi

great os, in my mind you describe his feelings and his mind well

but I think, it would be more tragically and maybe also more realistic, if his child didn't die because it was sick, assort because it was killed by the rebells in the war.
HestiaRue14 chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Wow that is really interesting I like your idea
The Rainbow Catcher chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
I never thought of it that way! I could see that, it makes you feel a little bad for the person, even though they are horrible. ): It was great though!
AngelWildWings181 chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
That was great... I've never really thought about the Hunger Games from this angle. Keep writing, you do it justice.
HappyHowler4myLuver chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
Despite the short length, this was so powerful and beautiful. It makes sense that this would occur, since Katniss voted for a final Hunger Games for the Capitol children. Great work.
Rena Pudding chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Wow. I LUVED IT!

That was really good, and I love how you made Pres. Snow (was it him?) have a heart. It made me feel kinda bad for him.

Almost ;)
turtleducklings chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
DUN DUN DUN!

I liked this a lot! It was really good. And it provides a good explanation.

GOODJOBDEARCHILD :)

-Demigod
xXAlleyXCatXx chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Wow, that's really dark and good though!