| Reviews for Home |
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  RandoReader chapter 5 . 5/28/2012 I absolutely loved it, Please upload part2 soon... |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2011 amazing. it fully captures the carnage of humanity’s worst loss, and their greatest stand. well done. |
 Just a Crazy-Man chapter 4 . 4/19/2011 Love. |
| RamenKnight chapter 4 . 1/1/2011 Wow, heart rending. Great job. This is my favorite so far. RamenKnight |
| RamenKnight chapter 2 . 1/1/2011 Beautiful. RamenKnight |
| Rming chapter 4 . 12/20/2010 You have a really excellent ability ti write endings. Could work on word order in sentences to make it flow better. For instance in chapter 3 you write "the captain walked onto the bridge and ordered..." it's a bit run on, try "The captain walked onto the bridge. "'blahblahblah"' he ordered." Maybe it works already for you, anyway, Stuff like that, but these stories are really good, so respect |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/20/2010 Beautiful The second story made me cry And the 4th one was close to tears as well Good job |
| Halcyon5 chapter 4 . 12/19/2010 Well, that was depressing. Yet extremely well written as well. Please continue. |
| Dragonhold44 chapter 3 . 11/22/2010 These stories are good! Really touching too, thought I was gana break into tears a couple time. Keep them comming. |
| The Fisher chapter 3 . 11/20/2010 Really sad. Amazing chapter. |
| Halcyon5 chapter 3 . 11/20/2010 Once again, another extremely well-crafted chapter. |
| DoubleDidigit42 chapter 3 . 11/20/2010 I just finished reading this series and quite frankly... I LOVE IT! Very Moving and I was Impressed as to how the author stuck to most of the events and charactrers of HALO: REACH & HALO: COMBAT EVOVED. Very well written and just plain awsome! 10 out of 10. |
| MonosGodOfPain chapter 1 . 11/6/2010 I like it. |
| Jarhead762 chapter 2 . 11/5/2010 This was amazing. Please continue |
| AJ Rayne chapter 2 . 11/5/2010 Powerful stuff. Can't wait to see the rest. |