That was very good. Well-written, and quite moving.

Pretty good. Am curious to see whether you'd cover the troopers down on the ground.

Sorry. I read over the fic again and see the cruiser is actually not the Trafalgar; I don't know how my sleep-addled brain construed it as such. That was sloppy of me.

That was very touching, but with a few small canonical errors in that the Trafalgar was a supercarrier, destroyed at the Battle of Reach, firgates are usually run by commanders, not captains, and a Lieutenant is not very likely to be commanding a cruiser, unless the true commander was KIA.

Other than that, very good.