Reviews for Argument
f2113 chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Spelling. Also, get the names of the characters right. It is really annoying when authors get the names of their characters wrong, especially their main characters. It suggests that the author didn't care enough to check what the name
LunarArtemis chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
This was really cute. I think I would like to see this with some more detail, or maybe just a sequel or something. It's a great idea. You did have some errors that I saw, nothing completely major though ;-) Instead of "definitely" at the end of the story, you had Lily saying "defiantly" No big deal though. Another set of eyes might help catch those mistakes (it's happened to me before). I really liked this story. Thanks for posting it!


Pengie chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
Cute first story, but Lily's last name is Evans, not Evens.