Reviews for Application Essay
Luvliacd chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
This was really well written. I think that Kelly would have loved Tony if she'd lived and yeah, she'd have wanted Tony and her dad together. Great job.
21JumpStreetMcQuaids chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
good start on the story so far please update
G23-Paxilion chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
Great story. I love the idea of Kelly surviving and Tony & Gibbs falling in love.

Enjoyed the clever way you chose to convey this and would love to see you expand this au universe.
njferrell chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
That was good!

You should continue with it...even if only a few chapters. Kelly could decide to get them together before she starts college...maybe get the team involved.

They could do everything from secret admirer gifts to a blind date...and if that don't work...lock them up somewhere alone. And if drastic measures are needed..they can always have Ducky slip them something to knock them out-remove their clothes-and lock them up!
WCUGirl chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
OOooooooh now this was really good-I think you should continue the story :) You know...have that unrequited love be not so unrequited, and tell it from Kelly's POV. :)

Love Jen