Reviews for Tell Him Yes
P chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Awesome! I'm so glad for them... yup, miss Evans, you made the right choice! ;D
VaticanCameoed chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Amazing. Love it... it's so sweet.
marietta chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
Oh, this is lovely! A First! Lily gets a clue! Beautifully done!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
I love Lily and Severus, and the irony of this is amazing! Oh, and because I love Harry so much, James will commit a crime worthy of Azkaban, and, wallah! Harry will be norm!
Linnea7 chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
This is a very cute one-shot! I am glad that Lily chooses Severus even though she is not in love with him at that moment. I never did understand how Lily ended up falling in love with James when he was the one who bullied her best friend. Thanks for the story!
RB chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
I wish (sigh!)
Saramagician chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
OMG! It was really interesting! very much attractive! I always thought Lily be blind! he he
neesie-pie chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Love it! Take that, Potter.
emicattt chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Woo! This is how it should have happened in canon!

I've read a few of your fics now and I think it's time I added you to my favourite authors...
bookworminpeace chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
This is one of those Stories that made me smile.

Thank you,

Because you made my day, It was a short Story, but it got the details and Didn't leave anything out

not to mention i LOVE the ending

EvanescingSky chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
I loved this! You did an excellent job of portraying what was going on in Lily's mind at the time! I liked how she found James attractice and Severus rather unattractive, because it made it more real, even though she chose Severus in the end. These guys are my absolute favorite couple!
slytherinsal chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
oh yes; a Lily who ISN'T so daft as to pick James. someone asked for this to expand to a full novella; i add my own request to that, pretty please with a cherry on the top. i always wondered why she would go off with james - wondered actually if it was on the rebound of Sev calling her mudblood - and speculated that if they had not died, divorce might have been on the cards. i like the take on writing in the first person; it's horridly hard over longer tales because you have to be more creative to show scenes the narrator doesn't personally see but if you do expand this any time in the future, i think it could be rewarding.
misundersnape chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
Wow - so much better than the original - and yes, there's my angst... just the right amount!

Great job, I am impressed, everybody wins - well, except James, the toerag... *snigger*

Of course, this might mean no "Chosen one" - but hey, that's another tale, right...

Invader Vidya chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
Lovely! -cheers- Encore, encore! This is what should've happened.
Wishtofly chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
Wonderful! Ah, it was marvelous! Brilliance! Spectacularness! High fives! Hugs! This mind-blowing pile of words has just won the superbowl! Amazing!
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