Reviews for The Lost Bonds
ZERO chapter 13 . 2/3
Still no chapter 14.13th Hour: yet?
Dash master 48 chapter 4 . 7/23/2016
Well did the Reaper catch them or not? You should have a SEES scene every chapter.

I actually had an idea where the Reaper catches the, and then Trial Reset.
ZERO chapter 13 . 9/12/2015
Still no chapter 14.13th Hour yet?
ZERO chapter 13 . 8/16/2015
Still no chapter 14:13th Hour yet?
ZERO chapter 13 . 3/19/2015
Nice...When's chapter 14?
Guest chapter 5 . 9/5/2014
tsun chapter 12 . 4/2/2014
does he have helel and satan on his compendium?
Kazuma Oozori chapter 11 . 12/14/2011
This is such an awesome story that is so cool that i read it 3 times...Oh yeah i almost forgot can you tell me please in which version persona 3 can i fuse Orpheus with the 4 ultimate spell cause it always glitch and i wish you good luck on your story see ya
dimensiontimetraveler chapter 10 . 12/9/2011
nvm on the review on ch11.. i totally read it wrong..but yeah, update pliz!
dimensiontimetraveler chapter 11 . 12/9/2011
wtf. kabuto kept nagato's rinnegan? why would madara give that up to that creep who could backstab hiM!
lovegameangel101 chapter 11 . 8/9/2011
cant wait for the next chapter!
JackFrost14 chapter 11 . 5/29/2011
i love it!, XD

update please?,
Ignisha chapter 10 . 12/24/2010
whew, I'm back!

Anyway, nice chapter. Yeah, that part with Kushina is sad... I wanna see the anime version already! But sadly, there's a few non-canon episodes, so it's gonna take a while... especially since the Gokage Summit arc is first... argh...

anyway, keep it up!


seconda etapa chapter 8 . 11/18/2010
The Minato VS Shadow Minato fight was hilarious. Good use of the Tobi is a good boy.
Sapphire09 chapter 7 . 11/11/2010
I apologize for reviewing this late. Life just... happens..

Anyway, this is a good story, remembering that this is your first story. (Congratulations, by the way :D)

I can see that your writing was improving chapter by chapter, and it was a definite plus. I also like the plot. It certainly is different, and I like it different :)

Of course, some character were OOC, especially the MC's character, but I think it wasn't a problem, though. A story won't be able to be made if we don't make the characters a bit OOC.

Anyway, keep it up! Ganbatte!
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