Reviews for Mixed Messages
dciphoenix chapter 6 . 12/30/2010
That was so beautifully written and not to mention it was professional! I love how you've captured bloom's thoughts and spirit in this chapter! I may say so dar it's the most descriptive! I love it, martha's my fave character but this is truly fantastic! You've gotten into bloom's head and told us what was in there! To the letter. I really do love and admire this. I will fave this!

I would really appreciate if you were to add me on facebook etc. Xxx
dciphoenix chapter 4 . 12/30/2010
Heyy oddly enjoying this atm. Strangly, well it's Identity so i do like it, i love it. Keep it coming in some form. Sequel, joining story, two parter etc. Xxx
krycek chapter 19 . 12/21/2010
Sorry, I'm back now :) I've overdosed on Of Mice and Men analysis, but I think I'm free for the rest of Christmas to write and review :D Awesome couple of chapters, your description always amazes me... can't wait 'til next time.
Eleantris chapter 19 . 12/21/2010
Brilliant chapter! I really enjoyed this, and I'm hoping Adile was being honest when she said she wouldn't do anything to hurt them. I can't wait for more!

LionessOfTheQuattro chapter 19 . 12/20/2010
Aww John And Martha Are So Cute ! I Love Their Addiction To Each Other. And Then Adile Comes Along And Slaps Him Which Just Made Me Laugh. 'I Cant Hurt you John' *Slap* A Bit Of Contradiction On Her Part Me Thinks XD

Rachel xx
Broken Kindle chapter 19 . 12/20/2010
Aww that was a nice little chapter, a sweet little moment between Martha and John there. I must admit I let out a little giggle when Adile slapped John xD

Thanks for another awesome chapter! :D
Deana Penn D chapter 18 . 12/17/2010
LionessOfTheQuattro chapter 18 . 12/17/2010
Amazing Chapter ! As Per Usual And The Kiss ! Omg It Was Gorgeous And Just Generally The Chapter Was Awesome (I Am Seriously Running Out Of Words For Amasing Damm This English Dictionary!)

Hope You Get Better Soon And I Didnt Notice Any Mistakes In It So Well Done For Getting This Done ) xx
zoe chapter 18 . 12/15/2010
Well I got this far :D such a good story.
Eleantris chapter 18 . 12/15/2010
Lovely chapter! That kiss was brilliant, and their fear but love for each other cme through so fantastically. I can't wait for more, and hope you get better soon!

Broken Kindle chapter 18 . 12/15/2010
Awesome chapter as always my friend.

I spotted a couple of errors, but since you're feeling under the weather I won't be nitpicky and point them out to you. Rest up, and feel better soon xx
krycek chapter 17 . 12/4/2010
I would be reviewing simply for the ice cream, but my house is snowed in and I just don't think ice cream would be the most apt kind of food. But luckily, that chapter was so freaking awesome that I decided to review anyway! But an agonisingly irritating place to end it, I may add. Please update soon? I can't wait :)
Eleantris chapter 17 . 12/3/2010
Woo, Jartha kiss and ice cream for me! Brilliant chapter as always, I loved it and can't wait for more!

Broken Kindle chapter 17 . 12/3/2010
Another wonderful chapter - yes you are mean (

I jest, great stuff - I look forward to the next part :D
LionessOfTheQuattro chapter 17 . 12/3/2010
I Was Reading It And Then I Was Sad Because There Was No More Chapters And Then I Saw There Was Another One And I Was Happy Again !

Really Good Chapter Want Them To Kiss They Are Sooo Cute )
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